for The Tales of Sadie Baker (Old Version)5/30/2011 c1 The Imagination Addict
hahaha fantastic first chapt! i love ur character already! sadie is so quirky n has such a unique take on things! way to be optimistic about being insulted! xD
hahaha fantastic first chapt! i love ur character already! sadie is so quirky n has such a unique take on things! way to be optimistic about being insulted! xD
5/21/2011 c1 little.artist
Okay, this seems like a pretty good story, but there are some bits which annoy me. For example, Sadie is too sarcastic. As in, she thinks all thse REALLY sarcastic words like "Right" and "But no..." and it's just repeated too much. Her character is also a little undeveloped in my opinion. She's supposed to be quite shy and 'nerdy', right? But then why is she suddenly great at soccer? Sadie is also using too many examples of movies to describe things around her eg. Mr Deeds, Heath Ledger etc.
Anyway, don't let my comment make you sad, I really don't like pointing out stuff like this :( I love your reference to Mulan though and I love that song too! :D Good luck with your future writing!
Okay, this seems like a pretty good story, but there are some bits which annoy me. For example, Sadie is too sarcastic. As in, she thinks all thse REALLY sarcastic words like "Right" and "But no..." and it's just repeated too much. Her character is also a little undeveloped in my opinion. She's supposed to be quite shy and 'nerdy', right? But then why is she suddenly great at soccer? Sadie is also using too many examples of movies to describe things around her eg. Mr Deeds, Heath Ledger etc.
Anyway, don't let my comment make you sad, I really don't like pointing out stuff like this :( I love your reference to Mulan though and I love that song too! :D Good luck with your future writing!
5/20/2011 c7 
564ShatteredButterflys
PERCY JACKSON IS THE BEST BOOK OF ALL TIME YOU ARE PURE AWESOMENESS! That just made this my fav story of all time!
564ShatteredButterflysPERCY JACKSON IS THE BEST BOOK OF ALL TIME YOU ARE PURE AWESOMENESS! That just made this my fav story of all time!
5/14/2011 c20 Moongirl
Aww.. I'm sad that it had to end. I wanted to keep reading more of Sadie Baker & Jesse William's tales :) Anyway, overall, the story is AWESOMESAUCE!
Aww.. I'm sad that it had to end. I wanted to keep reading more of Sadie Baker & Jesse William's tales :) Anyway, overall, the story is AWESOMESAUCE!
5/14/2011 c10 Moongirl
OmGlee I love Glee! I love Sadie. She is such a relatable person (to me, anyway).. and doesn't it look so wrong? Harry Potter being carried in Joker's arms? The mental image horrifies me. But I guess if it's Jessie and Sadie, then it's sweet. :)
Love this story so far!
OmGlee I love Glee! I love Sadie. She is such a relatable person (to me, anyway).. and doesn't it look so wrong? Harry Potter being carried in Joker's arms? The mental image horrifies me. But I guess if it's Jessie and Sadie, then it's sweet. :)
Love this story so far!
5/14/2011 c6 SarcasmIsPoetry
I love I'll Make a Man out of You, too! Pure awesomeness. That scene where Sadie dances to its tune was hilarious!
I love I'll Make a Man out of You, too! Pure awesomeness. That scene where Sadie dances to its tune was hilarious!
5/13/2011 c20 ranika
that was definitely amazing! very nice story...:D
that was definitely amazing! very nice story...:D
5/10/2011 c20 chasingoffthedaysx
Oh wow, that was amazing! 8D This story was really funny and cute, though the ending seemed kinda rushed to me, but overall, it was well-written. Good job! :)
Oh wow, that was amazing! 8D This story was really funny and cute, though the ending seemed kinda rushed to me, but overall, it was well-written. Good job! :)
5/10/2011 c1 1Kshixey
I loved this story! I loved the characters. I stayed up till 5:30am to finish it, I couldn't stop reading it! The movie and show references were So fun and the story made me laugh out loud several times. Very awesome!
1KshixeyI loved this story! I loved the characters. I stayed up till 5:30am to finish it, I couldn't stop reading it! The movie and show references were So fun and the story made me laugh out loud several times. Very awesome!
5/9/2011 c20 2A.J. Saunders
I loved reading this story! Sadie was odd, but definitely a likeable character. I loved her personality and attitude. I also found it funny when she went off on random tangents. :) I will definitely read your next story when I have the time.
2A.J. SaundersI loved reading this story! Sadie was odd, but definitely a likeable character. I loved her personality and attitude. I also found it funny when she went off on random tangents. :) I will definitely read your next story when I have the time.
5/8/2011 c20 xXxSpecialKxXx
Omg, words cannot describe how much I loved this story; it was the first story that came up in my search a few days ago and I read it on a whim. I was not disappointed! I love how Sadie is so random/off kilter and still gets the gorgeous sweet guy in the end. I loved the progression (I'm a sucker for stories that make the relationship gradual rather than an instantaneous thing) and the ending lines were awesome xD
Overall, great job and I hope you continue writing as I am sure whatever you write will turn out just as great as this story did, if not better :)
Omg, words cannot describe how much I loved this story; it was the first story that came up in my search a few days ago and I read it on a whim. I was not disappointed! I love how Sadie is so random/off kilter and still gets the gorgeous sweet guy in the end. I loved the progression (I'm a sucker for stories that make the relationship gradual rather than an instantaneous thing) and the ending lines were awesome xD
Overall, great job and I hope you continue writing as I am sure whatever you write will turn out just as great as this story did, if not better :)