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5/31/2010 c1 N.Chaos
I like it, quite a bit actually.

It's self-loathing without being wangsty.

I'm seeing sarcastic humor as opposed to straight out giggleshits.

The last three lines are especially good.
5/13/2010 c1 24Aamori
Um... Its an okay poem, i suppose. But why is it in humor? I mean, its not funny at all, so...?
5/13/2010 c1 13behindthesebigbrowneyes
this was in the humor section? im sorry but this should not be in humor abusive parents arent funny so make it funny or take it out of humor

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