7/19/2010 c1 5Dr. Self Destruct
From the description of this story, I can easily tell that this would be something wonderful to read while there was thrash metal playing in the background-everything has a very horror-like feel to it. I find your main character very interesting and unique-it's not very often that you read stories about a grave robber.

I saw a few typos, so let me include those before I continue with my review:

"He had thought that justice had been served; the true beast was slayed but he was wrong, instead the man ran rapid."

I think instead of 'rapid' at the end of the sentence, 'rampant' might work a bit better.

"People who knew there way around, and that could defend themselves and The Grave Collector all at the same time."

'There' should be 'their' in this sentence.

"It took thousands to defeat the creation, thousands of lives lost but at least the sacrifice did not go in vein."

The 'vein' you use at the end should be 'vain'.

"He knew that he was created for a purpose and it was to serve his master as he see fit, but not that his master was dead perhaps he should find a new purpose for himself."

In this sentence it should be 'he saw fit' instead of 'he see fit'.

"The rotted trio tried to approach him, but the effort went in vein."

Again, it should be 'vain' at the end instead of 'vein'.

All that aside, I really enjoyed reading this. I can almost picture it being a music video for someone like Rob Zombie-very cool. I found the clown and his temper to be the funniest out of the lot. Is it just me or are all clowns mentally unstable?

Great job. =)