
5/15/2010 c1
6anita darling
Aw, I adore it!
Seriously.
Red Vs. Blue? That alone makes this story fully amazing. :D (And it was great other than that too, of course.)
I want an Elijah of my own. :'(
Anita. Xx

Aw, I adore it!
Seriously.
Red Vs. Blue? That alone makes this story fully amazing. :D (And it was great other than that too, of course.)
I want an Elijah of my own. :'(
Anita. Xx
5/13/2010 c1
1Alternate Ending
Aww this was so adorable with so many cute parts towards the second half. Your writing style is pretty good, I mean maybe some cleaning up a little, but I absolutly loved this. Elijah seemed like such a good-looking sweetheart :) And Lucy was well developed with her strengths and weeknesses etc. So anyway great job!

Aww this was so adorable with so many cute parts towards the second half. Your writing style is pretty good, I mean maybe some cleaning up a little, but I absolutly loved this. Elijah seemed like such a good-looking sweetheart :) And Lucy was well developed with her strengths and weeknesses etc. So anyway great job!
5/13/2010 c1 sandcastlesinthesand
okay, so i read this story and loved it.
then i looked at your username,...
and i was like why is that so familiar?
then i was like WAIT! is that catherine's tumblr?
and so i checked.
and it is.
and the weird thing is, i was thinking about you when i was reading it because i know you love vintage cameras and you posted that awesome website with the old cameras that were found.
ANYWAY
LOVE YOU
okay, so i read this story and loved it.
then i looked at your username,...
and i was like why is that so familiar?
then i was like WAIT! is that catherine's tumblr?
and so i checked.
and it is.
and the weird thing is, i was thinking about you when i was reading it because i know you love vintage cameras and you posted that awesome website with the old cameras that were found.
ANYWAY
LOVE YOU
5/13/2010 c1
8sealednectar
Hey, this was really lovely and interesting. I enjoyed it a lot. I liked that you've made it so descriptive and realistic as well. Those old photos told such a sweet and heartbreaking story. That was creative. Elijah's proclomation of love was kind of sudden but I guess this is how it is in real life sometimes. I thought their conversation at the end could've been longer. Great job nonetheless. Keep writing.

Hey, this was really lovely and interesting. I enjoyed it a lot. I liked that you've made it so descriptive and realistic as well. Those old photos told such a sweet and heartbreaking story. That was creative. Elijah's proclomation of love was kind of sudden but I guess this is how it is in real life sometimes. I thought their conversation at the end could've been longer. Great job nonetheless. Keep writing.
5/13/2010 c1 PhenomenalSmile
OMG~! THIS ONE-SHOT IS AMAZING! =D I'm totally in love with it, this story just made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! YOUR AWESOME, I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!
OMG~! THIS ONE-SHOT IS AMAZING! =D I'm totally in love with it, this story just made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! YOUR AWESOME, I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!