
7/15/2011 c1
3Jordan Mizakina
Great story! I may have to search up the rest of it. :) Great job on character building and such. The only thing I would ask is of more explaination of the characters' situation, which was a little vague, but it's still a good story.

Great story! I may have to search up the rest of it. :) Great job on character building and such. The only thing I would ask is of more explaination of the characters' situation, which was a little vague, but it's still a good story.