for Conversion Book 2: Bloodlines6/30/2010 c14 
1Karida
I couldn't help giggling at their "reunion" ... it'd be hilarious if they met up like that every time, definitely memorable to bystanders lol
Really can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if the mixed they find will become a family friend or potential enemy...you never know with vampires ~.^
Update soon, I fall more in love with the characters every chapter ^_^
1KaridaI couldn't help giggling at their "reunion" ... it'd be hilarious if they met up like that every time, definitely memorable to bystanders lol
Really can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if the mixed they find will become a family friend or potential enemy...you never know with vampires ~.^
Update soon, I fall more in love with the characters every chapter ^_^
6/30/2010 c14 1PeterMoore
i so want to know if they react to each other like that because he is her creator or because they are in love or if it is a special bond. anyway it was hilarous. i love halina and emma's interactions with each other. thanks for the update
1PeterMoorei so want to know if they react to each other like that because he is her creator or because they are in love or if it is a special bond. anyway it was hilarous. i love halina and emma's interactions with each other. thanks for the update
6/30/2010 c14 J Money 012
AW! Yay! I've been waiting for this chapter FOREVER! I've been checking my e-mail every time I get online, just waiting for that update e-mail. I love this chapter, a good happy moment between the two. As for their attraction to one another, I think it's 'cause they're in love. Because what if a guy created another guy and he wasn't playing for that team (if you know what I mean) it'd be pretty awkward. But anyways, I hate that her humongous belly gets in the way of their loving. I can't wait 'till the twins are born, I know I'm just going to fall in love with them; much like I've fallen in love with Teren and Emma. Well, I'm satisfied, FOR NOW! :D
~J$
AW! Yay! I've been waiting for this chapter FOREVER! I've been checking my e-mail every time I get online, just waiting for that update e-mail. I love this chapter, a good happy moment between the two. As for their attraction to one another, I think it's 'cause they're in love. Because what if a guy created another guy and he wasn't playing for that team (if you know what I mean) it'd be pretty awkward. But anyways, I hate that her humongous belly gets in the way of their loving. I can't wait 'till the twins are born, I know I'm just going to fall in love with them; much like I've fallen in love with Teren and Emma. Well, I'm satisfied, FOR NOW! :D
~J$
6/30/2010 c14 5charliej
Woo! Very HOT the way she got all fired up about him coming home. I'll be curious to know the reason for this. I'm leaning towards the creator-created thing or...maybe because they're both vamps while all the other ladies have been in vamp-human relationships.
Loved your description of Halina sitting there waiting for the show to begin. Oh she is a naughty one!
Interesting how the 'scenting' of each other calmed them down.
Too bad about the car. I can imagine Teren steeling himself to do the deed and back into a cement pole...or maybe he used his vampire strength to dent the car? Either way, if he's like most men, it must have almost killed him to purposely 'hurt' his car!
Those journals sure are frustrating. I hope this latest possible clue proves to be useful, especially since it interupted their sex! I agree they need privacy. It would be extremely inhibiting to know you're always being overheard! I suppose like constantly having to think 'are the kids awake? can they hear us?'
Can't wait for the next update!
5charliejWoo! Very HOT the way she got all fired up about him coming home. I'll be curious to know the reason for this. I'm leaning towards the creator-created thing or...maybe because they're both vamps while all the other ladies have been in vamp-human relationships.
Loved your description of Halina sitting there waiting for the show to begin. Oh she is a naughty one!
Interesting how the 'scenting' of each other calmed them down.
Too bad about the car. I can imagine Teren steeling himself to do the deed and back into a cement pole...or maybe he used his vampire strength to dent the car? Either way, if he's like most men, it must have almost killed him to purposely 'hurt' his car!
Those journals sure are frustrating. I hope this latest possible clue proves to be useful, especially since it interupted their sex! I agree they need privacy. It would be extremely inhibiting to know you're always being overheard! I suppose like constantly having to think 'are the kids awake? can they hear us?'
Can't wait for the next update!
6/30/2010 c14 6BulletWaterfall
wow, LOVED the 2 minute comment! i also loved how she didn't even think of it as an insult at first. yet another great chapter!
6BulletWaterfallwow, LOVED the 2 minute comment! i also loved how she didn't even think of it as an insult at first. yet another great chapter!
6/29/2010 c13 anonymous8D
Ben finally got a bcakbone! YAY
I wonder if theres anymore bad stuff coming up. Maybe Halina and Imogen will find the vamp there looking for, but he'll be a bloodthirsty monster, or maybe he'll be a hermit, sworn never to talk to anyone...
What's next?
Ben finally got a bcakbone! YAY
I wonder if theres anymore bad stuff coming up. Maybe Halina and Imogen will find the vamp there looking for, but he'll be a bloodthirsty monster, or maybe he'll be a hermit, sworn never to talk to anyone...
What's next?
6/27/2010 c13 J Money 012
I'm speechless. Really, I have no idea what to say to that chapter. To be honest, it was a little depressing. She's basically saying bye to everyone. Sigh, well I understand, everyone's waiting to see what'll happen to her. Thanks for the chapter, can't wait for the next one!
I'm speechless. Really, I have no idea what to say to that chapter. To be honest, it was a little depressing. She's basically saying bye to everyone. Sigh, well I understand, everyone's waiting to see what'll happen to her. Thanks for the chapter, can't wait for the next one!
6/27/2010 c13 5charliej
Yay! Things are smoothing out...relatively...for our fav couple! I love the slow careful detailed way you describe her checking out Teren. I kept expecting to see him beside me! LOL! And her fascination with his blood, and almost biting him - could make for some very hot sex in the future!
I'm so glad Ben has pulled himself together. I wondered about him feeling better about everything, now that he knew he could defend himself, but wasn't sure if that's how you would write it or not. So glad you did.
HEHEHE - Tracy and Ben had a nooner and now Emma won't use that washroom again!
Glad all the phone calls went well but I can anticipate some problems arising when everyone keeps visiting esp. the whole food issue.
Too bad the journals haven't revealed anything yet about other vamps. Hope they get a break soon!
5charliejYay! Things are smoothing out...relatively...for our fav couple! I love the slow careful detailed way you describe her checking out Teren. I kept expecting to see him beside me! LOL! And her fascination with his blood, and almost biting him - could make for some very hot sex in the future!
I'm so glad Ben has pulled himself together. I wondered about him feeling better about everything, now that he knew he could defend himself, but wasn't sure if that's how you would write it or not. So glad you did.
HEHEHE - Tracy and Ben had a nooner and now Emma won't use that washroom again!
Glad all the phone calls went well but I can anticipate some problems arising when everyone keeps visiting esp. the whole food issue.
Too bad the journals haven't revealed anything yet about other vamps. Hope they get a break soon!
6/27/2010 c13 anonypie
I feel like everything is so bittersweet. It kinda causes this ache in my chest as I read. :(
I feel like everything is so bittersweet. It kinda causes this ache in my chest as I read. :(
6/27/2010 c13 pbgurl
How many months along is Emma?
I hope they can find something in those journals to help Emma. :(
And yay to Ben! I guess now he won't have Halina wipe his memory.
-Liz :D
How many months along is Emma?
I hope they can find something in those journals to help Emma. :(
And yay to Ben! I guess now he won't have Halina wipe his memory.
-Liz :D
6/27/2010 c13 1Karida
Haha Clarice is so awkward, she's hiding her sentimental side under her cynical side ^_^ ...
Yay! Ben doesn't want to forget! That made my day right there, I'm so glad he's going to remember, it must be such a relief for Teren!
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
1KaridaHaha Clarice is so awkward, she's hiding her sentimental side under her cynical side ^_^ ...
Yay! Ben doesn't want to forget! That made my day right there, I'm so glad he's going to remember, it must be such a relief for Teren!
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
6/27/2010 c6 10balloonfista
I'm so glad someone other than Emma and Ash know..especially a guy! Now Teren can have a real guys night out without worrying!
I LOVE BEN NOW!
Ri
10balloonfistaI'm so glad someone other than Emma and Ash know..especially a guy! Now Teren can have a real guys night out without worrying!
I LOVE BEN NOW!
Ri