6/9/2010 c7 5charliej
Well, surprise for me - there were two chapters that I hadn't read! Now wasn't that exciting! Wow - the whole Hot Ben thing had me worried, still does as a matter of fact. I hope he keeps his mouth shut and that he finally gets over the shock and remains Teren's friend...Can't wait to see where your creative little mind takes this!

I loved the wedding, the vows, the party, the description...you did a great job on that. And near the end when Teren is having his chat with Ben and Ben realizes who was listening in...poor guy!

Oh, and what did Tracey say to Ben...hm? Inquiring minds over here - tehehe

The wedding night was perfect. It was so thoughtful of him to hop in the hot tub like that. Everything seems just perfect...which usually means disaster around the corner!

A wonderful chapter as always. Eagerly awaiting the next bit!

6/9/2010 c7 anonypie
Excellent! Hot Ben makes me nervous now..and I love how you ended this chapter. :) I'm so excited for Emma's growing bump and the mysterious sound that wasn't present in this chapter :)

6/9/2010 c6 1PeterMoore
i am glad that ben seemed more okay with it at the end. thanks with the update

6/6/2010 c6 6summers-end
Haha, Hot Ben knows now. I hope he decides to keep the information and stay Teren's friend. That would be nice. I did find it interesting though that he did notice that Teren is always cold. I guess Emma's fears about that were a little justified after all.

So I pretty much want to fast forward past the wedding and go straight to the babies, I'm so excited about them! Loved the joke on Twilight by the way, that was brilliant!

Update soon!

summers-end

6/6/2010 c6 anonypie
Thanks for the update! Loved it, and i'm loving the long chapters :) ooh i'm so excited for the wedding! :D

6/3/2010 c5 5charliej
Whoa - eating is bad for vamps. Bad, bad, bad. Poor little vamps. I was thinking they'd just vomit or a take a couple of bites and excuse themselves and spit it out. Good thing Halina was there to help them.

I loved your description of the ranch and all the decorations for the wedding. It sounds lovely as does the ranch house itself. Did you see a place like this, or just make it up.

The bach. parties were great. I can just imagine how embarrassed Emma would be with her mother dancing with those guys. And the fact that the one fellow was so nice to her sister...Hey, maybe by the end of the story, something nice happens for her?

Teren's texts were so funny, especially the last one and Tracey was so bad sending that last one. I felt sorry for Hot Ben, having such a massive hang-over but it was clever of Teren.

Life seems to be having a few complications for them and I'm sure you have lots more planned in the story.

Still wondering about what Teren is listening for all the time. As I said, I have an idea but...

6/3/2010 c5 anonymous8D
I didn't miss the part when Emma came home from the party to find Teren listening to something. I think that is going to play a big part in the story, eventually.

I remember you writing something about how vampires couldn't digest food so, it comes out the same way in goes in, but I didn't know it would be THAT painful and upsetting. It only shows how much the whole family cares for each other, to go through something like that to protect each other.

6/3/2010 c5 1PeterMoore
it was so sad that teren had to throw up all that blood. i could only think of that scene in jennifer's body when megan foxx throws up. thanks so much for the update