for Conversion Book 2: Bloodlines7/13/2010 c19 tamii
Hot Ben (love how you're still calling him that! I won't be able to refer to him as Ben... won't be the same, lol!) has sure changed a lot from before. I'm proud of him! And glad that Teren and Emma, Teren especially, have a friend that knows about them.
So, we finally meet more mixed! The bodyguard is kinda freaky! He didn't even say a word but seemed so creepy! I can't figure Starla out but it seems as though they may be able to help. The interaction between Starla and Jacen shows that they are pretty normal... for vampires, anyway. So that gives me hope :)
I'm glad Teren and Emma finally cleared up the whole Carrie issue. It makes sense now that we have more information about her and I'm glad Emma is pretty much over it. She's 7 months! Only 2 left and a greater chance of the babies survival every day! If she makes it to 8 months, then the babies will probably live... right? Gosh, I have no idea what is in store for the rest of this story and that's saying something! Normally, I suss the plot out a few chapters in apart from a few stories. But I have no idea what's going to happen next! Thanks for updating and I can't wait to read more!
Hot Ben (love how you're still calling him that! I won't be able to refer to him as Ben... won't be the same, lol!) has sure changed a lot from before. I'm proud of him! And glad that Teren and Emma, Teren especially, have a friend that knows about them.
So, we finally meet more mixed! The bodyguard is kinda freaky! He didn't even say a word but seemed so creepy! I can't figure Starla out but it seems as though they may be able to help. The interaction between Starla and Jacen shows that they are pretty normal... for vampires, anyway. So that gives me hope :)
I'm glad Teren and Emma finally cleared up the whole Carrie issue. It makes sense now that we have more information about her and I'm glad Emma is pretty much over it. She's 7 months! Only 2 left and a greater chance of the babies survival every day! If she makes it to 8 months, then the babies will probably live... right? Gosh, I have no idea what is in store for the rest of this story and that's saying something! Normally, I suss the plot out a few chapters in apart from a few stories. But I have no idea what's going to happen next! Thanks for updating and I can't wait to read more!
7/11/2010 c18 
5charliej
Oh - thank you, thank you, thank you! Early update! Doing a happy dance...well, not really since I'm reclining but anyway...
Glad they're finally planning for this early delivery. LOL him scooping up doctors and Halina wiping them but...it is a VERY good plan!
Now this mysterious visitor. Hmm...friend or foe? And the even more mysterious black car following! A great way for a vamp to follow during the day. (hey - they should get one for the girls so at least Imogen and Alana wouldn't be trapped at the house quite so much.)
I love how Emma's almost getting off as she moves closer to him and Starla's comments and valley-girl personality are funny! I'll be curious to see where the story heads next.
Feel free to do an early update any time you wish!
5charliejOh - thank you, thank you, thank you! Early update! Doing a happy dance...well, not really since I'm reclining but anyway...
Glad they're finally planning for this early delivery. LOL him scooping up doctors and Halina wiping them but...it is a VERY good plan!
Now this mysterious visitor. Hmm...friend or foe? And the even more mysterious black car following! A great way for a vamp to follow during the day. (hey - they should get one for the girls so at least Imogen and Alana wouldn't be trapped at the house quite so much.)
I love how Emma's almost getting off as she moves closer to him and Starla's comments and valley-girl personality are funny! I'll be curious to see where the story heads next.
Feel free to do an early update any time you wish!
7/11/2010 c18 moonshine-love
AH!
This is totally the best chapter in a long time, simply because something is finally HAPPENING.
Oh my gosh, I am so excited; it is incredibly lame, haha. But oh well.
Anyway...
Fabulous job!
Can't wait for the next update. :)
AH!
This is totally the best chapter in a long time, simply because something is finally HAPPENING.
Oh my gosh, I am so excited; it is incredibly lame, haha. But oh well.
Anyway...
Fabulous job!
Can't wait for the next update. :)
7/11/2010 c18 J Money 012
AH! Yay! I love this! Whoo! Can't wait for the next chapter. You wouldn't BELIEVE how happy I was when I saw my e-mail this morning! I don't even know what to say because I'm so anxious for the next chapter. It's about time that they get a lead. After all the stuff they've been through, finally, some answers! Well I gotta go, thanks for the great chapter!
~J$
AH! Yay! I love this! Whoo! Can't wait for the next chapter. You wouldn't BELIEVE how happy I was when I saw my e-mail this morning! I don't even know what to say because I'm so anxious for the next chapter. It's about time that they get a lead. After all the stuff they've been through, finally, some answers! Well I gotta go, thanks for the great chapter!
~J$
7/11/2010 c18 A ventriloquists ventriloquist
Really Really good one of the best Vamp stories I've read in a long time and all thanks to charliej pointing me in the right direction. Keep up the good work!
Really Really good one of the best Vamp stories I've read in a long time and all thanks to charliej pointing me in the right direction. Keep up the good work!
7/11/2010 c18 pbgurl
Okay, things are really starting to get even more interesting now that Starla has showed up. I'm anxious to see who this mystery person she wants them to meet is. ^_^
YaY! thank you for the quick update!
-Liz :D
Okay, things are really starting to get even more interesting now that Starla has showed up. I'm anxious to see who this mystery person she wants them to meet is. ^_^
YaY! thank you for the quick update!
-Liz :D
7/11/2010 c18 anonymous8D
I know I made this guess so many times..., but I'm still afraid that Starla will try nd hit on Teren and then try to seduce him.
It's so fictionpress cliche. An ex or hot girl comes around, boyfriend hormones goes crazy...BOOM, drama time.
I know Teren loves Emma, but that stupid feeling won't go away. I don't know why, but I have a bad feeling about Starla, I'm not sure though...
Hm, I have no clue who that person is, the one who's interested in meeting Teren. Maybe it's the ex from the beginning of the story, but she turned vamp? Unlikely, but I'm totally clueless.
I know I made this guess so many times..., but I'm still afraid that Starla will try nd hit on Teren and then try to seduce him.
It's so fictionpress cliche. An ex or hot girl comes around, boyfriend hormones goes crazy...BOOM, drama time.
I know Teren loves Emma, but that stupid feeling won't go away. I don't know why, but I have a bad feeling about Starla, I'm not sure though...
Hm, I have no clue who that person is, the one who's interested in meeting Teren. Maybe it's the ex from the beginning of the story, but she turned vamp? Unlikely, but I'm totally clueless.
7/11/2010 c18 anonypie
Wow! You're updating faster than the speed of light! It makes me giddy! :) Chapter 17 ended on a sad note, but it was so beautifully written..I swear, I felt like I heard a sad symphony playing in my head while reading it haha. Chapter 18 picked up the suspense again and I am back on the edge of my seat, especially with this "mysterious" Starla and the man following in the other vehicle. Starla rubs me off in the wrong way, so I would be surprised if she ends up being nice and helpful. So far, she has answered some questions that I've had, but that doesn't necessarily mean she's truly nice and helpful. I'm so anxious for you to update..I wish I could just force you to update on the hour, but that would kill the suspense factor. I like being kept on the edge of my seat. So thank you! Until next time :D
Wow! You're updating faster than the speed of light! It makes me giddy! :) Chapter 17 ended on a sad note, but it was so beautifully written..I swear, I felt like I heard a sad symphony playing in my head while reading it haha. Chapter 18 picked up the suspense again and I am back on the edge of my seat, especially with this "mysterious" Starla and the man following in the other vehicle. Starla rubs me off in the wrong way, so I would be surprised if she ends up being nice and helpful. So far, she has answered some questions that I've had, but that doesn't necessarily mean she's truly nice and helpful. I'm so anxious for you to update..I wish I could just force you to update on the hour, but that would kill the suspense factor. I like being kept on the edge of my seat. So thank you! Until next time :D
7/11/2010 c18 yellowjellybean14
I like starla, she is different and i like her hopefully she can stick around in the story. I hope in the next chapter there will be some answers and guidance. love the updates and hope that you will be able to update again ASAP.
I like starla, she is different and i like her hopefully she can stick around in the story. I hope in the next chapter there will be some answers and guidance. love the updates and hope that you will be able to update again ASAP.
7/11/2010 c18 whocares
O, starla sounds interesting...
i wish you would write a story on halina's excapades...they should be fun...will halina ever find her own match in her vampire life? i wish she would!
and i would be most interested in reading about ash's love life as well...should be really awesome if she does meet someone
O, starla sounds interesting...
i wish you would write a story on halina's excapades...they should be fun...will halina ever find her own match in her vampire life? i wish she would!
and i would be most interested in reading about ash's love life as well...should be really awesome if she does meet someone
7/11/2010 c18 6summers-end
Oh man! So excited about Starla and her story. And she obviously knows what turning a pregnant woman could mean. But she didn't say it'd be fatal automatically, just dangerous so there's a chance! Yay!
Glad Teren stopped with the madness. Thank god Halina decided to take over like she did-finally! And having the focus be on the children sounds much less stressful. Yay babies, haha.
Update soon!
summers-end
6summers-endOh man! So excited about Starla and her story. And she obviously knows what turning a pregnant woman could mean. But she didn't say it'd be fatal automatically, just dangerous so there's a chance! Yay!
Glad Teren stopped with the madness. Thank god Halina decided to take over like she did-finally! And having the focus be on the children sounds much less stressful. Yay babies, haha.
Update soon!
summers-end
7/11/2010 c18 sandysnape
YAY! Two chapters. I'm moving and haven't been reviewing as often. For the first time in weeks I'm hopeful that this story will end well with a minimum of bloodshell.
Great chapter ans always.
YAY! Two chapters. I'm moving and haven't been reviewing as often. For the first time in weeks I'm hopeful that this story will end well with a minimum of bloodshell.
Great chapter ans always.