for HalfLight5/27/2010 c1 Punslinger
This is a vivid description of ordinary events that gives us extraordinary glimpses below the surface. You have some striking lines. My favorites are "Gravel hops and scatters under our feet." and "the air flings us apart."
This is a vivid description of ordinary events that gives us extraordinary glimpses below the surface. You have some striking lines. My favorites are "Gravel hops and scatters under our feet." and "the air flings us apart."