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6/5/2010 c1 lili999
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5/18/2010 c1 4HexeYuki
Ah the little things that scare and terrify us... lol
5/18/2010 c1 The Duelist's Heiress
Interesting Story. If you have time, there are a few things I suggest you fix. "Cliffside" does not need to be capitalized. Also "I was utterly freezing, not to mention a ruthless headache caused by my violent shaking seemed to split my head in two." would read better as:

I was utterly freezing, not to mention suffering from a ruthless headache caused by my violent shaking that seemed to split my head in two.

Nice job.

TDH

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