for Flying Free8/15/2010 c8 Ruth
O_O Wha? MOAR PLOXX!
O_O Wha? MOAR PLOXX!
8/14/2010 c8 BloodyTrinity
Aw! Dragon! I wanna friend dragon!
awesome saucesome :)
Aw! Dragon! I wanna friend dragon!
awesome saucesome :)
37/30/2010 c7 woodbyne
whats up with you and cliffhangers? seriously, dude, come on! but other then the second in a row cliffhanger, this chapter was awesome. i like Kyle, even though hes only said one line! update soon! =^_^=
whats up with you and cliffhangers? seriously, dude, come on! but other then the second in a row cliffhanger, this chapter was awesome. i like Kyle, even though hes only said one line! update soon! =^_^=
7/29/2010 c7 AnticipatedSerendipity
I love this story. The chapters are short and I want more. _ It's getting realy good. Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait. You're doing great.
I love this story. The chapters are short and I want more. _ It's getting realy good. Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait. You're doing great.
7/29/2010 c7 BloodyTrinity
ooh! cant wait to see where this goes! and where they are and who they are :) schweetness
ooh! cant wait to see where this goes! and where they are and who they are :) schweetness
7/16/2010 c6 AnticipatedSerendipity
I really love your story so far. I browse through a lot of works, but this caught my attention. I like everything about it! The story is becoming interesting now, and I hope that you have enough time to keep it coming. I'm looking forward to it!
I really love your story so far. I browse through a lot of works, but this caught my attention. I like everything about it! The story is becoming interesting now, and I hope that you have enough time to keep it coming. I'm looking forward to it!
7/8/2010 c6 MD
The first part of the chapter was kind of confusing to me, I didn't really understand what was happening (though it could be because of my sleep deprivation). I got the latter part of the story, and it was interesting. I wonder why they have these 'powers' and what you have planned for them next. Keep up the good writing, I'll be looking for the next update.
The first part of the chapter was kind of confusing to me, I didn't really understand what was happening (though it could be because of my sleep deprivation). I got the latter part of the story, and it was interesting. I wonder why they have these 'powers' and what you have planned for them next. Keep up the good writing, I'll be looking for the next update.
7/8/2010 c6 Ruthe-La
YAY ROZZLE!
And awesome chapter, a nasty cliffie and poor Jess! Poor Sora! Zoned Luke snaps back!
YAY ROZZLE!
And awesome chapter, a nasty cliffie and poor Jess! Poor Sora! Zoned Luke snaps back!
7/8/2010 c6 woodbyne
im guessing that the dragon is protecting an egg. im probably wronge, but anyway. you tell us it might be a while until you update again, and then you end with a cliffie? whats up with that? and poor Jess! shame, man. oh well, not much i can do to help her.
im guessing that the dragon is protecting an egg. im probably wronge, but anyway. you tell us it might be a while until you update again, and then you end with a cliffie? whats up with that? and poor Jess! shame, man. oh well, not much i can do to help her.
7/8/2010 c6 BloodyTrinity
Oops! Lol thats awesome cant wait to see what happens
Oops! Lol thats awesome cant wait to see what happens
7/5/2010 c5 aPondInTime
Come on, write more.
P.S. I have already reviewed, so technically, I don't need to write anything here at all. :D
Come on, write more.
P.S. I have already reviewed, so technically, I don't need to write anything here at all. :D
7/3/2010 c5 MD
Interesting story, I can't wait to see where you go with this. That whole having other people hear your thoughts would be confusing and hard to deal with. It's interesting, keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to your next update.
Interesting story, I can't wait to see where you go with this. That whole having other people hear your thoughts would be confusing and hard to deal with. It's interesting, keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to your next update.
6/19/2010 c4 lolbookwormtoo lazy to login
yay! I like this chapter... not so much the Jess going away thing, but it's well written. Hope you write more soon. Like Luke btw.
yay! I like this chapter... not so much the Jess going away thing, but it's well written. Hope you write more soon. Like Luke btw.