6/16/2010 c4 10WakeMageJoshua
Hmm, interesting indeed. I'm liking the straight read, it's refreshing since my own style is very detailed and meticulous. Honestly, you would know better than anyone what will happen next, though I do hope for a big foul, nasty beastie that flies and chases after this apparently friendly one. I do love a good sky battle. As it appears that Luke can manipulate a persons will (i.e.-Sora's sleeping spell) I do hope for some offensive and defensive external abilities. That is the best I can offer though.

If you have some time and wouldn't mind, my current story, Extra Credit, needs some review-love, I'm just curious of what people are think frankly. Thanks- Joshua

6/16/2010 c4 Ruthe-La
Who, Rosy!

PLEASE UPDATE!

6/7/2010 c1 lili999
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5/20/2010 c2 woodbyne
hello! this story is really good, Rosy! please post the next one, i want to find out what the hell is up with all the mind reading thats going on here! or you could just tell me at school...no, i'd rather read it. so update. please?