for Shining Star11/12/2010 c1 
5ShippoCY88
Sorry it took me this long to read this, but this is beautifully written. I was enchanted; you painted such a beautiful picture.
Just one comment: In the third line, do you mean, "He could light up the night sky" instead of 'like'?
5ShippoCY88Sorry it took me this long to read this, but this is beautifully written. I was enchanted; you painted such a beautiful picture.
Just one comment: In the third line, do you mean, "He could light up the night sky" instead of 'like'?