for On Being Carly10/15/2014 c13 xEchoxInfernox
I am ridiculously excited about this story's comeback, it makes life awesome.
I am so happy that it was a clean, easy, break-up with Nate, i did NOT see him having a crush on Mariska though, nice one. And Jay is pretty smart(kinda), glad Carly listened.
The mustache part was brilliant, i think i'm gonna do that next time i do something evil...
The whole chapter is pretty dang entertaining. So happy.
Looking forward to what happens next, dunno how Kirk got there so fast but it's hilarious that he tackled her.
I am ridiculously excited about this story's comeback, it makes life awesome.
I am so happy that it was a clean, easy, break-up with Nate, i did NOT see him having a crush on Mariska though, nice one. And Jay is pretty smart(kinda), glad Carly listened.
The mustache part was brilliant, i think i'm gonna do that next time i do something evil...
The whole chapter is pretty dang entertaining. So happy.
Looking forward to what happens next, dunno how Kirk got there so fast but it's hilarious that he tackled her.
10/5/2014 c13 Guest
Thank you ViciousArticulate! I've been here from the beginning since In The Cookie Jar and I am so happy you're continuing/finishing this story! So glad you're back! Great chapter :D
Thank you ViciousArticulate! I've been here from the beginning since In The Cookie Jar and I am so happy you're continuing/finishing this story! So glad you're back! Great chapter :D
10/1/2014 c13 viciousarticulate
YOU DID THE UPDATE THING WITH THE WRITING ON THE CARLY YAY!
My apologies for the lack of eloquence it seems THE JOY THAT HAS OVERCOME ME IS TOO GREAT.
Yay Kirk. Yay Kirk and Carly and tackling. TACKLING, I SAY.
YOU DID THE UPDATE THING WITH THE WRITING ON THE CARLY YAY!
My apologies for the lack of eloquence it seems THE JOY THAT HAS OVERCOME ME IS TOO GREAT.
Yay Kirk. Yay Kirk and Carly and tackling. TACKLING, I SAY.
9/28/2014 c13 
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
I am so happy to see this finally updated (you have no idea how excited I was to get the email hahaha) and I find that your rusty feeling has not come through, so don't even worry.
I do think you have a bit of a plot hole here at the end of this chapter where you say that Kirk tackled her to the ground, how did he know where exactly they were (Aaron didn't tell him) and how did he get there so fast?
My only other problem is, the chapter was too short lol, I hope to see more updates soon. Will you be writing any other stories?
Thanks for coming back btw, I'm really glad that you did.
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiCI am so happy to see this finally updated (you have no idea how excited I was to get the email hahaha) and I find that your rusty feeling has not come through, so don't even worry.
I do think you have a bit of a plot hole here at the end of this chapter where you say that Kirk tackled her to the ground, how did he know where exactly they were (Aaron didn't tell him) and how did he get there so fast?
My only other problem is, the chapter was too short lol, I hope to see more updates soon. Will you be writing any other stories?
Thanks for coming back btw, I'm really glad that you did.
9/27/2014 c1 Guest
finally :) nice work. Please dont abandon this
finally :) nice work. Please dont abandon this
9/26/2014 c13 1lost keys
Ok so was scrolling along. Checking everything on my fiction press account, looking at my favorite stories and...BAM!
Oh... my ...lord...
ITS UPDATED!
*crazy arm flapping dance*
Thank you, you wonderful soul for updating when I though all hope was lost. I had actually thought you wouldn't come back but here you are!
I think I'm going to cry...
1lost keysOk so was scrolling along. Checking everything on my fiction press account, looking at my favorite stories and...BAM!
Oh... my ...lord...
ITS UPDATED!
*crazy arm flapping dance*
Thank you, you wonderful soul for updating when I though all hope was lost. I had actually thought you wouldn't come back but here you are!
I think I'm going to cry...
9/26/2014 c13 authorchik039
Thank god forViciousArticulate! Thought you'd never show up again! Kind of relieved that the break up was smoothso that is awesome, please update soon! Please?
Thank god forViciousArticulate! Thought you'd never show up again! Kind of relieved that the break up was smoothso that is awesome, please update soon! Please?
9/26/2014 c13 Apple Lefrog
Although you felt extremely rusty, I thought that chapter turned out great still. I laughed so many times throughout this chapter, it felt great! :D It's great to see you back and I hope that you can finish this story! I hope that you find your motive/inspiration to write for fun again! .
Although you felt extremely rusty, I thought that chapter turned out great still. I laughed so many times throughout this chapter, it felt great! :D It's great to see you back and I hope that you can finish this story! I hope that you find your motive/inspiration to write for fun again! .
9/26/2014 c13 gemini613
Oddly enough, I was thinking about this story this morning. Weird since I haven't read it in a few years. Excited to read new chapters though.
Oddly enough, I was thinking about this story this morning. Weird since I haven't read it in a few years. Excited to read new chapters though.
8/16/2014 c12 Apple Lefrog
really great story! it gets me riled up and makes me laugh so hard. i like the plot and it has the right amount of drama. i hope that you can update soon! its really good! :) i like carly's love story better than zee's, to be honest. well, good luck in life!
really great story! it gets me riled up and makes me laugh so hard. i like the plot and it has the right amount of drama. i hope that you can update soon! its really good! :) i like carly's love story better than zee's, to be honest. well, good luck in life!
12/16/2013 c1 noname
PLEASE UPDATE. THE LACK OF CLOSURE IS EATING ME UP INSIDE. PLEEEEEEAAAAAASE!
PLEASE UPDATE. THE LACK OF CLOSURE IS EATING ME UP INSIDE. PLEEEEEEAAAAAASE!
10/26/2013 c12 Derpina96
i'm begging you PLEAAASE pretty please finish this it's just one or two chapters and it could be over just to put my mind at ease PLEASE
i'm begging you PLEAAASE pretty please finish this it's just one or two chapters and it could be over just to put my mind at ease PLEASE
10/18/2013 c12 solosinger1
I know it's been a long time but you have to finish this story! It's super great, characters are spectacular, and you can't just stop! I love it, please continue.
I know it's been a long time but you have to finish this story! It's super great, characters are spectacular, and you can't just stop! I love it, please continue.