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5/22/2010 c1 3order out of chaos
This was so sad, but so poignant, and really, really well-written. You did good with this. I'm glad to see you're writing again, and I'm glad to see it's something that's as good as this. ^^

I feel so bad for poor Liz. She's able to pick herself up and get out of her hometown, but everyone else is just kinda stuck there...it's a really miserable situation. This whole sense of how she didn't fit in with her own family just rang throughout the whole piece, and that really stinks. A fter all, your family is who you should be able to count on no matter what.

I hope someday she can patch things up with them. At least she and her father had an OK relationship.

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