for The Kingdom of Rain6/25/2023 c1 Jules
Hi! Commenting on a decade old fic to say I read these fics ages ago and I come back to them every once in a while because I love them so much. I hope you’ve continued writing.
Hi! Commenting on a decade old fic to say I read these fics ages ago and I come back to them every once in a while because I love them so much. I hope you’ve continued writing.
6/4/2013 c9 JXLegend
Lol, the ending of this chapter is quite funny. However, it also brings to the readers interest of what is up with these delusions? Is she just having actual, inexplicably vivid daydreams/dreams or is she just going crazy?
Lol, the ending of this chapter is quite funny. However, it also brings to the readers interest of what is up with these delusions? Is she just having actual, inexplicably vivid daydreams/dreams or is she just going crazy?
6/4/2013 c7 JXLegend
I find the areas in which Elena "wakes up" from the real world and the "Kingdoms" quite humorous. She questions her own reality. Is this a theme, having a grip on one's own reality?
I find the areas in which Elena "wakes up" from the real world and the "Kingdoms" quite humorous. She questions her own reality. Is this a theme, having a grip on one's own reality?
6/4/2013 c4 JXLegend
Okay, you have really inspired me to continue writing my story very soon...As soon as school ends. I'm really interested in this story. It was very well written and it is actually humorous. I will be following this and favoriting it as well
Okay, you have really inspired me to continue writing my story very soon...As soon as school ends. I'm really interested in this story. It was very well written and it is actually humorous. I will be following this and favoriting it as well
6/3/2013 c2 JXLegend
This is a very interesting story...AND YOU HAVE 9 PARTS TO IT! TIME TO GET SOME READING DONE!
This is a very interesting story...AND YOU HAVE 9 PARTS TO IT! TIME TO GET SOME READING DONE!
4/26/2013 c50 
1bravesierra
I'm so late to discovering this awesome story. D: Anyways I pretty much finished part one in a couple days and I'm completely hooked. The characters are amazing. Although I can't help but feel as thought the Elena is a little...sue-ish. But the other characters more than makes up for it. Goo job. Off to part two!
1bravesierraI'm so late to discovering this awesome story. D: Anyways I pretty much finished part one in a couple days and I'm completely hooked. The characters are amazing. Although I can't help but feel as thought the Elena is a little...sue-ish. But the other characters more than makes up for it. Goo job. Off to part two!
2/26/2013 c44 GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees
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now I don't know whether I like Lawson or Phinn more. The conservative in me wants to cling onto Lawson, like a pre-pubescent girl wants to cling onto her childhood or first crush.
But then there's Phinn...
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH H
jasdfkjwoiqfejkalsjfio;qjwpeofi qjwpeofijasp odfi emotions why you do this to me
now I don't know whether I like Lawson or Phinn more. The conservative in me wants to cling onto Lawson, like a pre-pubescent girl wants to cling onto her childhood or first crush.
But then there's Phinn...
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH H
2/26/2013 c42 GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees
Noooooooooo not no to the marriage proposal, but YES, say YESSSSS.
I also just realized that I wasn't logged in for my two previous reviews, which makes me upset. Very, very upset. Poop, once more.
Noooooooooo not no to the marriage proposal, but YES, say YESSSSS.
I also just realized that I wasn't logged in for my two previous reviews, which makes me upset. Very, very upset. Poop, once more.
2/26/2013 c41 Guest
They HUGGED. Do you not understand the gravity of this situation?! They. hugged. As in ihugging/i (I put the html to add necessary emphasis on just how important this is to me).
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They HUGGED. Do you not understand the gravity of this situation?! They. hugged. As in ihugging/i (I put the html to add necessary emphasis on just how important this is to me).
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2/26/2013 c40 Guest
Aww, but I'm kind of for Lawson :( Poop.
Aww, but I'm kind of for Lawson :( Poop.
12/31/2012 c50 1The Imaginatrix
Hi!
I just opened my Fiction Press account about a month ago, and have been regularly browsing the Fantasy archive ever since. I noticed "The Kingdom of Storms" being updated every few days, it seemed, and thought there was little point in reading it without reading its SIX prequels, so I went to your profile and got started. As you can see, I've now finished "The Kingdom of Rain".
I'm very impressed by this concept. Very, VERY impressed. The whole idea of the chaste beauties is extremely fascinating, and the twist when you revealed the "seven sons" were actually five sons and two daughters was artfully executed. As of the end of this book, my favourite of the seven is Quentin, and my least favourite is Sage. This may very well change as I progress through the series, however.
And speaking of the seven sons, Cole and Turner...You wouldn't happen to be a fan of "Charmed", would you?
I'm also very impressed by your writing, and in my opinion, you really don't need a beta reader. You live in Japan, so you're either a Japanese person who's REALLY good at writing in English, or an American who moved to Japan, though I'll need you to tell me which guess is closer. Either way, you are a very good writer. When I've finished with this series, I may go back to your older works and read them as well. It's going to take me a while though, what with all the material you've posted. xD
I respond to PMs, so drop me a line if you want to. I'd like to make some more friends on FP. I have some on Fanfiction, but I'm still getting my bearings here, and won't be posting any of my own work for a while yet.
Be assured that I'll continue reading this series, but I'm gonna give myself a little break from it now. Good things in moderation and all that.
Trix.
1The ImaginatrixHi!
I just opened my Fiction Press account about a month ago, and have been regularly browsing the Fantasy archive ever since. I noticed "The Kingdom of Storms" being updated every few days, it seemed, and thought there was little point in reading it without reading its SIX prequels, so I went to your profile and got started. As you can see, I've now finished "The Kingdom of Rain".
I'm very impressed by this concept. Very, VERY impressed. The whole idea of the chaste beauties is extremely fascinating, and the twist when you revealed the "seven sons" were actually five sons and two daughters was artfully executed. As of the end of this book, my favourite of the seven is Quentin, and my least favourite is Sage. This may very well change as I progress through the series, however.
And speaking of the seven sons, Cole and Turner...You wouldn't happen to be a fan of "Charmed", would you?
I'm also very impressed by your writing, and in my opinion, you really don't need a beta reader. You live in Japan, so you're either a Japanese person who's REALLY good at writing in English, or an American who moved to Japan, though I'll need you to tell me which guess is closer. Either way, you are a very good writer. When I've finished with this series, I may go back to your older works and read them as well. It's going to take me a while though, what with all the material you've posted. xD
I respond to PMs, so drop me a line if you want to. I'd like to make some more friends on FP. I have some on Fanfiction, but I'm still getting my bearings here, and won't be posting any of my own work for a while yet.
Be assured that I'll continue reading this series, but I'm gonna give myself a little break from it now. Good things in moderation and all that.
Trix.
10/28/2012 c32 1lobsterwife
Okay hi you're probably wondering why I'm reviewing a part one chapter but AWRHJD. I JUST. SO MANY FEELINGS ABOUT THIS. I don't know if you had tons of future things planned when you wrote this but WOW. There are tons of little references to Phinn's CB powers, and the connection between children of CB and the CB themselves, and GAJSH you're a really good writer, just saying.
Also this chapter makes me weep and I read it all the time, and just ahjhfdhfjdfd. I'm actually going through and rereading some of my favorite chapters from past books, and it's so weird to see how this relationship in particular has evolved over six books. Like YOU'RE A GOOD WRITER OKAY. I'm sorry for this totally random, crazy, weird, review ;A;
1lobsterwifeOkay hi you're probably wondering why I'm reviewing a part one chapter but AWRHJD. I JUST. SO MANY FEELINGS ABOUT THIS. I don't know if you had tons of future things planned when you wrote this but WOW. There are tons of little references to Phinn's CB powers, and the connection between children of CB and the CB themselves, and GAJSH you're a really good writer, just saying.
Also this chapter makes me weep and I read it all the time, and just ahjhfdhfjdfd. I'm actually going through and rereading some of my favorite chapters from past books, and it's so weird to see how this relationship in particular has evolved over six books. Like YOU'RE A GOOD WRITER OKAY. I'm sorry for this totally random, crazy, weird, review ;A;