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7/30/2012 c7 Guest
love it. you are so good!
7/22/2012 c3 1Jolly Rogers
This is very entertaining.

There is a very addictive voice behind your work. The humor was mostly good and the dialogue fun. The plot is holding my interest.

You seem to have done a lot of Elena stories and they all seem like very long pieces individually. It will be awhile before I catch up but something tells me reading through all this won't exactly be torture. ;)
7/14/2012 c50 Guest
Holy crap! I absolutely love your story and I'm happy I managed to finish it in about five hours! Elena is a strong, sensible girl which are good traits in a heroine because her rationalizing and inner monologue helps me not get sidetracked. I enjoy the way she absorbs information that is presented to her and keeps it in mind for later use.

I was very impressed with the plot twist with the 'Seven Sons' and definitely did not expect two of them to be daughters! Lawson is by far my favourite, closely followed by Quentin and Phinn.

You've done a fantastic job with the Kingdoms and I'm sure I'll wake up tomorrow and look for them in the sky. Air Swimmers seem like the ultimate adrenaline sport and I can picture Elena's expression when she's on one.

Great job! I can't wait to read the rest!
4/23/2012 c6 30Neuravinci
That was such a random turn of events of him telling her to slay the demon. Idid not expect that at all. Again Alice in Wonderland is called to mind whatiwth the unexpected turn of events.
4/23/2012 c5 Neuravinci
Dear goodness, that Lawson is lawless. He's so...ugh, to say the least (I'm sorry I can't find another term beyond ugh, but I'm sure you can fill in the blank with your own negative word).

I am greatly liking your story and will continue reading :)
4/23/2012 c4 Neuravinci
This story almost reminds me of Alice in Wonderland where you never know what to expect! :) Good job keeping me intrigued
4/23/2012 c3 Neuravinci
I have to admit, your side commentary is quite amusing. I approve lol.
4/23/2012 c2 Neuravinci
So this world exists in her mind, eh? She will prob be able to enter that world whenver she wants, or at least, that's what I'm hoping :)
4/23/2012 c1 Neuravinci
Very nice so far. I find your voice intriguing, very conversational. I rather like it. But now I will cut this review short because I'm dying to know what that random ladder means and what the hand thats pulled her up belongs to.
3/16/2012 c1 swords dragons and diet coke
Awwwww poor Elena/3 I really like where this story is going so far and I look forward to reading more!
3/4/2012 c3 4Solomon Sia
(Oh, also, I must mention that Seth has been prattling on for attention in the background of this entire conversation. His commentary is not stimulating enough to put down on paper and, since the others are ignoring him, we might as well ignore him as well.)

My personal favourite.
3/4/2012 c1 Solomon Sia
Really interesting writing style! I like the whimsicality and indulgence of the story when random anecdotes appear. The emotions are portrayed with skill and you have an eye for the strange and ludicrous, which is the mark of a great writer. At the same time, there is an excitement when reading because of the minor hook you put in, how someone pulled her up the rest of the way.
2/28/2012 c1 Account3726
Wow. I wish I could write like this. Honestly, I think you could publish this and get a Newberry Honor. Really. 'Course, I've obviously have never gotten one myself, so I don't know how one goes about doing it but... You get my point. It's awesome.
1/27/2012 c50 1lobsterwife
Just doing some re-reading. I felt it was needed seeing how I forgot a lot of stuff. But reading book one over again was amazing and super enjoyable. It's kind of weird too because some of the characters are so different here. It's fun seeing how far they've come since then. I also noticed some foreahadowy stuff which made me all excited. Now onto book two!
8/28/2011 c1 1Mrs-Writer's-Block
Love it!~
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