for The Kingdom of Rain5/1/2011 c49 deadgummiegirl
I'm so glad you're back! And I'm sorry for everything you had to go through with the earthquake and all. But another great chapter none the less.
I'm so glad you're back! And I'm sorry for everything you had to go through with the earthquake and all. But another great chapter none the less.
3/7/2011 c46 Dashita Tichou
Okay... Cole sounds like an adorable little evil mastermind! (Just like that little Kilgore t hingamabob on My Life as a Teenage Robot)
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Okay... Cole sounds like an adorable little evil mastermind! (Just like that little Kilgore t hingamabob on My Life as a Teenage Robot)
I LOVE YOUR STORY!
3/2/2011 c45 
1Dashita Tichou
Your story is amazing and I love your plaot. This is seriously more amazing than over half the actual books I have read. Your characters are really developed and you keep them constant in their personalities. I love your plot and Elana is hilarious! She's got great luck... I wish I could live in that world!
1Dashita TichouYour story is amazing and I love your plaot. This is seriously more amazing than over half the actual books I have read. Your characters are really developed and you keep them constant in their personalities. I love your plot and Elana is hilarious! She's got great luck... I wish I could live in that world!
2/27/2011 c44 1lobsterwife
There are no words. Actually there are words but they mostly consist of me squealing like a crazy person. This story makes me feel so many feelings! Like "oh my gawd phinn what are you doing" and "anya take a chill pill jeez". So I can't wait for the next chapter now. All this intrigue! Also, I was having a real blah day and this update cheered me up so thanks :D
1lobsterwifeThere are no words. Actually there are words but they mostly consist of me squealing like a crazy person. This story makes me feel so many feelings! Like "oh my gawd phinn what are you doing" and "anya take a chill pill jeez". So I can't wait for the next chapter now. All this intrigue! Also, I was having a real blah day and this update cheered me up so thanks :D
2/26/2011 c44 deadgummiegirl
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT? throughout the whole chapter i was like WHAT! And I've just come to realize that almost all of your chapters end that way. Update soon plz! :)
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT? throughout the whole chapter i was like WHAT! And I've just come to realize that almost all of your chapters end that way. Update soon plz! :)
2/22/2011 c43 lobsterwife
OH DAMN. I'M SORRY I'M RAPING THE CAPS BUTTON, BUT OH DAMN. I SO need to know what happens next. I probably will not stop thinking about this all week. This is what your do to me, madam (not that I'm complaining or anything...) It's just that fbajfbajk! I can't even articulate my feelings right now. Sorry for being so absolutely insane right now :D
OH DAMN. I'M SORRY I'M RAPING THE CAPS BUTTON, BUT OH DAMN. I SO need to know what happens next. I probably will not stop thinking about this all week. This is what your do to me, madam (not that I'm complaining or anything...) It's just that fbajfbajk! I can't even articulate my feelings right now. Sorry for being so absolutely insane right now :D
2/22/2011 c43 10raped by a female bunni
cliffhanger!
why would you do that? ok, now im really confused. i like both phinn and lawson equally!
*pout*
10raped by a female bunnicliffhanger!
why would you do that? ok, now im really confused. i like both phinn and lawson equally!
*pout*
1/30/2011 c39 1lobsterwife
Oh WHAT. First I need to say that seeing TKOR updated totally makes my day. Now let's hope that Elena doesn't do anything stupid involving you-know-who. I was actually a little surprised when she returned to to the "real world". At first I was like "Mr. Redley?" then I kind of realized that oh yeah that's her history teacher guy. Hm...
1lobsterwifeOh WHAT. First I need to say that seeing TKOR updated totally makes my day. Now let's hope that Elena doesn't do anything stupid involving you-know-who. I was actually a little surprised when she returned to to the "real world". At first I was like "Mr. Redley?" then I kind of realized that oh yeah that's her history teacher guy. Hm...
1/30/2011 c1 Anonymous
I think you've copied the concept of "The Vampire Diaries" in your story. Especially Elena - coincidence much? However, your wording & grammar is good! :)
I think you've copied the concept of "The Vampire Diaries" in your story. Especially Elena - coincidence much? However, your wording & grammar is good! :)
1/27/2011 c38 1lobsterwife
Okay so I'm getting really excited about this. We get to meet Ryder and Cole soon *does a happy dance* This chapter make me jump around a little because of the whole 'Elle' thing haha. Phinn and Elena have such an interesting/strange/funny relationship (what with both of them being so interesting/strange/funny themselves). I can't wait until the next chapter, but, sadly, I will have to have some patience.
1lobsterwifeOkay so I'm getting really excited about this. We get to meet Ryder and Cole soon *does a happy dance* This chapter make me jump around a little because of the whole 'Elle' thing haha. Phinn and Elena have such an interesting/strange/funny relationship (what with both of them being so interesting/strange/funny themselves). I can't wait until the next chapter, but, sadly, I will have to have some patience.
1/26/2011 c38 deadgummiegirl
I am so excited for the meeting where we finally get to meet the other siblings! This story keeps getting better and better.
I am so excited for the meeting where we finally get to meet the other siblings! This story keeps getting better and better.