for Letters to Heroes5/14/2012 c4 mmyself
This is a brilliant story, seriously i love it so far it is completely captivating and i find the pace of it to be perfect as you aren't rushing any of the characters.
i hope you decide to update soon :)
This is a brilliant story, seriously i love it so far it is completely captivating and i find the pace of it to be perfect as you aren't rushing any of the characters.
i hope you decide to update soon :)
3/15/2011 c4 
21truelylostandfound
I love this story! You have done such a good job, detailing the characters having them grow with each other, and showing their weaknesses as well as their strengths.
I love how the guys have developed and cannot wait to hear more from them! Learn their pasts and personalities more in depth ^_^.
It sounds strange, but the letters feel... real. They have that kind of slight awkwardness that you get when you don't know what to write someone, and you don't really know the person well. I could see myself opening my own mail and reading that from someone.
I'm really impressed and can't wait to read more.
The only thing I'm iffy about is Korynn's relationship with Anna. it seems like they are best friends too quickly. Then again, a lot more time has passed in the story than it seems... so the friendship could be at that level in the timeline. Guess I'm just gonna have to read it again. ;)
Keep up the good work!
Eager reader,
T
21truelylostandfoundI love this story! You have done such a good job, detailing the characters having them grow with each other, and showing their weaknesses as well as their strengths.
I love how the guys have developed and cannot wait to hear more from them! Learn their pasts and personalities more in depth ^_^.
It sounds strange, but the letters feel... real. They have that kind of slight awkwardness that you get when you don't know what to write someone, and you don't really know the person well. I could see myself opening my own mail and reading that from someone.
I'm really impressed and can't wait to read more.
The only thing I'm iffy about is Korynn's relationship with Anna. it seems like they are best friends too quickly. Then again, a lot more time has passed in the story than it seems... so the friendship could be at that level in the timeline. Guess I'm just gonna have to read it again. ;)
Keep up the good work!
Eager reader,
T
3/13/2011 c4 2Catherine611
Damn straight you wouldn't be writing this except for me :P I don't even know how many times I've had to bug you to wring these four chapters out of you :P.
It's awesome, as usual :)...Now where's the rest? Hahaha kidding, kidding...Sort of :P
2Catherine611Damn straight you wouldn't be writing this except for me :P I don't even know how many times I've had to bug you to wring these four chapters out of you :P.
It's awesome, as usual :)...Now where's the rest? Hahaha kidding, kidding...Sort of :P
3/10/2011 c1 Xiaolu
I stumbled over this today, enjoyed it a lot even though the patriotism here in France isn't the same at all.
Your chararacterization is pretty good and I love Rynn and all the guys. :)
I also read your profile and I'm sorry to hear that this has been plagarized. ): It totally needs to stop, I'm fed up with people stealing and thinking it's 'nothing' because it's not.
I stumbled over this today, enjoyed it a lot even though the patriotism here in France isn't the same at all.
Your chararacterization is pretty good and I love Rynn and all the guys. :)
I also read your profile and I'm sorry to hear that this has been plagarized. ): It totally needs to stop, I'm fed up with people stealing and thinking it's 'nothing' because it's not.
3/9/2011 c4 EmptySh3ll
Yeah, you finally updated. Hopefully you update soon because that was just an unfair cliff hanger.
Yeah, you finally updated. Hopefully you update soon because that was just an unfair cliff hanger.
3/8/2011 c4 1Rae Kitano
I almost forgot about this story. I'm so pleased you posted.
I liked the inclusion of the telphone conversation. It makes the solders characters a little stronger and real.
1Rae KitanoI almost forgot about this story. I'm so pleased you posted.
I liked the inclusion of the telphone conversation. It makes the solders characters a little stronger and real.
6/5/2010 c3 3Mitchie
another good chapter.
i want to get to know the boys more, haha (especially Cade). R u going to write a chapter in their POV at all? That would b really neat.
Update soon please!
:o)
3Mitchieanother good chapter.
i want to get to know the boys more, haha (especially Cade). R u going to write a chapter in their POV at all? That would b really neat.
Update soon please!
:o)
6/3/2010 c3 12vitavitavegimin
Once again, I love this story.
The first line struck me as a little awkward in its construction, but the rest was amazing.
I love love love how you give each of the boys such a distinct voice. Keep writing!
12vitavitavegiminOnce again, I love this story.
The first line struck me as a little awkward in its construction, but the rest was amazing.
I love love love how you give each of the boys such a distinct voice. Keep writing!
6/3/2010 c3 1Rae Kitano
Great chapter. You first line "The day after Brielle and I's fight" doesn't sound right. Something maybe like, "The day after I fight (argue) with Brielle". I dont know but that first line bugged me a little.
Any way besides that, I really enjoyed this chapter. I really hope that Anna and Beth become Korynn new best friends, she needs poeple like that in her life and I hope her Grand doesn't interfere although I can see something like that happening in the future (but I hope not).
Well done.
Rae.
1Rae KitanoGreat chapter. You first line "The day after Brielle and I's fight" doesn't sound right. Something maybe like, "The day after I fight (argue) with Brielle". I dont know but that first line bugged me a little.
Any way besides that, I really enjoyed this chapter. I really hope that Anna and Beth become Korynn new best friends, she needs poeple like that in her life and I hope her Grand doesn't interfere although I can see something like that happening in the future (but I hope not).
Well done.
Rae.
5/26/2010 c2 12vitavitavegimin
I love this story so far! Your characterization is beautiful and the plotline is pretty original. Update soon, please!
12vitavitavegiminI love this story so far! Your characterization is beautiful and the plotline is pretty original. Update soon, please!