for I love8/29/2010 c1 
29YasuRan
In one word: sweet. The verse had a delicate soft appeal to it. I thought this one was a stroke of brilliance:
'I love
all the times we've spent together
and the times we still haven't'
That felt very genuine and heartfelt, if not the most wittiest thing I've read.
Well done.
29YasuRanIn one word: sweet. The verse had a delicate soft appeal to it. I thought this one was a stroke of brilliance:
'I love
all the times we've spent together
and the times we still haven't'
That felt very genuine and heartfelt, if not the most wittiest thing I've read.
Well done.
7/27/2010 c1 23Mandisaurus-rex
Great way to end this poem! I thought it was really cute =). It flowed nicely, and it was smoothe and planned out...very well done!
~Mandi
23Mandisaurus-rexGreat way to end this poem! I thought it was really cute =). It flowed nicely, and it was smoothe and planned out...very well done!
~Mandi
5/26/2010 c1 43losing oxygen
I love...
this! ^^ It's so cute, and well written, and a great topic, and ... and ... I got nothing. ^^' I love this. So awesome! ^^
Peaz!
~Train
43losing oxygenI love...
this! ^^ It's so cute, and well written, and a great topic, and ... and ... I got nothing. ^^' I love this. So awesome! ^^
Peaz!
~Train