for Use Them6/5/2010 c1 
1SinxWithxAxGrin
Sheesh, sorry for taking so long to review this. I have to do something right away or else I forget... you know how bad my short term memory can be. Sigh. Anyways! Omg! You actually posted something! Woo!
For such a short poem, this sure does speak depths. Most everyone understands what it feels like to be used and also what it's like to use somebody(Like for chocolate peanut butter cake... cough). I really admire the rhymes you used throughout this poem. I remember when we were using "you" and "true" and easy rhymes like that, but in this poem you use words that can be quite difficult to rhyme. The poem flows well and I lurvs the last four lines.
It's good to have your writing back! It's been too long. Haha. I've actually been writing, too. Yay! I wish I would have remembered this account first, because then I wouldn't have made a whole new one XD Dir.
1SinxWithxAxGrinSheesh, sorry for taking so long to review this. I have to do something right away or else I forget... you know how bad my short term memory can be. Sigh. Anyways! Omg! You actually posted something! Woo!
For such a short poem, this sure does speak depths. Most everyone understands what it feels like to be used and also what it's like to use somebody(Like for chocolate peanut butter cake... cough). I really admire the rhymes you used throughout this poem. I remember when we were using "you" and "true" and easy rhymes like that, but in this poem you use words that can be quite difficult to rhyme. The poem flows well and I lurvs the last four lines.
It's good to have your writing back! It's been too long. Haha. I've actually been writing, too. Yay! I wish I would have remembered this account first, because then I wouldn't have made a whole new one XD Dir.
6/3/2010 c1 lijuan
hi !
Cheap retail watch, sunglasses, belt, hats/caps, High quality T-shirts,ED hardy t-shirts,ED Hardy hoodies,ED hardy ,Jeans,GUCCI shoes,LV Handbag,Chanel Handbag…high quality,low price.welcome to:
hi !
Cheap retail watch, sunglasses, belt, hats/caps, High quality T-shirts,ED hardy t-shirts,ED Hardy hoodies,ED hardy ,Jeans,GUCCI shoes,LV Handbag,Chanel Handbag…high quality,low price.welcome to:
5/30/2010 c1 2063M2R
Good rhyme. I like the clarity of the hurt you portray. It's what a lot of victims of bully want to convey. This is indeed a good write to let the world see those who chose to swallow the bitter pill. I feel like giving you a hug. (:
I was once a victim of bully, and therefore I sincerely thank you for writing this to show the world how we embrace and endure.
2063M2RGood rhyme. I like the clarity of the hurt you portray. It's what a lot of victims of bully want to convey. This is indeed a good write to let the world see those who chose to swallow the bitter pill. I feel like giving you a hug. (:
I was once a victim of bully, and therefore I sincerely thank you for writing this to show the world how we embrace and endure.
5/29/2010 c1 lili999
Discount Nike air jordans ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 90 Sneakers ()
Discount Nike Air Max 91 Supplier ()
Discount Nike Air Max 95 Shoes Supplier ()
Discount Nike Air Max 97 Trainers ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2003 Wholesale ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2004 Shoes Wholesale
( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2005 Shop ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2006 Shoes Shop ()
Discount Nike Air Max 360 Catalogs ( )
Discount Nike Air Max Ltd Shoes Catalogs ()
Discount Nike Air Max Tn Men's Shoes ( )
Discount Nike Air Max Tn 2 Women's Shoes (http:/w.cas
Discount Nike air jordans ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 90 Sneakers ()
Discount Nike Air Max 91 Supplier ()
Discount Nike Air Max 95 Shoes Supplier ()
Discount Nike Air Max 97 Trainers ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2003 Wholesale ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2004 Shoes Wholesale
( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2005 Shop ( )
Discount Nike Air Max 2006 Shoes Shop ()
Discount Nike Air Max 360 Catalogs ( )
Discount Nike Air Max Ltd Shoes Catalogs ()
Discount Nike Air Max Tn Men's Shoes ( )
Discount Nike Air Max Tn 2 Women's Shoes (http:/w.cas
5/28/2010 c1 2Journey21
Are you the user or the used? It's like you wrote this poem about my single mother. Absolutely honest and beautiful.
2Journey21Are you the user or the used? It's like you wrote this poem about my single mother. Absolutely honest and beautiful.
5/28/2010 c1 118Thenardier
Loved the choice of words, the diction, the rhyme and rhythm. Simple and honest, a really enlightening read.
118ThenardierLoved the choice of words, the diction, the rhyme and rhythm. Simple and honest, a really enlightening read.