for My Summer at Camp Hell5/31/2010 c1 
36Qui
It's a good start-re-start? and since I barely remember the first version, I'm pretty excited about this one!
It's nice to see you're around and writing again!
Qui
36QuiIt's a good start-re-start? and since I barely remember the first version, I'm pretty excited about this one!
It's nice to see you're around and writing again!
Qui
5/30/2010 c1 17Ayakaishi Fei
I liked this better than the original I think, your writing is very fluid, and even though I've never actually been on any kind of summer camp, it was very easy to picture. I'm looking forward to seeing how you've changed everything, and how this will progress.
17Ayakaishi FeiI liked this better than the original I think, your writing is very fluid, and even though I've never actually been on any kind of summer camp, it was very easy to picture. I'm looking forward to seeing how you've changed everything, and how this will progress.