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7/20/2010 c1 6Kalista Jia
Oh dear, I quite like this short poem a lot!

The guilty effect the poem has on the reader is strong.

"just go on unseen

by the blind eyes

of the human being."

What you said is very true and I do feel the same for little ants as well. (that's probably why I stare at the pavement as I walk to avoid stepping on them) Glad to you wrote a poem on it!

It's is beautifully written.

Also, the title is well chosen. I like it a lot as well.

Fantastic work.

Kalista Jia


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