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6Kalista Jia
Oh dear, I quite like this short poem a lot!
The guilty effect the poem has on the reader is strong.
"just go on unseen
by the blind eyes
of the human being."
What you said is very true and I do feel the same for little ants as well. (that's probably why I stare at the pavement as I walk to avoid stepping on them) Glad to you wrote a poem on it!
It's is beautifully written.
Also, the title is well chosen. I like it a lot as well.
Fantastic work.
Kalista Jia
.
6Kalista JiaOh dear, I quite like this short poem a lot!
The guilty effect the poem has on the reader is strong.
"just go on unseen
by the blind eyes
of the human being."
What you said is very true and I do feel the same for little ants as well. (that's probably why I stare at the pavement as I walk to avoid stepping on them) Glad to you wrote a poem on it!
It's is beautifully written.
Also, the title is well chosen. I like it a lot as well.
Fantastic work.
Kalista Jia
.