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10/1/2011 c1 11phoenixchild13
it's a really good story, i like it. but , i think you should take this idea and turn it into a longer story, i think it would turn out great. you're a great writer,keep going
7/6/2010 c1 Wildblumen
I would have preferred it much more if you had explained how the raping process happened, otherwise it's a real nice piece ;)

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6/6/2010 c1 BandGeekLove
how sweet, the ending i mean. the rest of the story was okay, but u should be pround of what you wrote

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