for Seeds of Dreams and Discontent6/2/2010 c1 
23Love And Feathers
Great job, i especially liked the lines "How can you obtain redemption
When you think you're always to blame?"
I really made a personal connection with it. It was all great though, keep it up. I felt like the poem got stronger and stronger as it progressed, especially the last 3 stanzas.
23Love And FeathersGreat job, i especially liked the lines "How can you obtain redemption
When you think you're always to blame?"
I really made a personal connection with it. It was all great though, keep it up. I felt like the poem got stronger and stronger as it progressed, especially the last 3 stanzas.