for Satan Devours His Child4/30/2012 c1 
14Self-DissectedPsyche
A brilliant telling of the painting "Saturn" (I'm assuming). I absolutely love how you truly turned the painting into a story. Macabre, visually visceral, all words, images and lines written powerfully to support the whole. "And heaving the bundle/Devouring his child" man that final line gave me chills! Fine work, DAMN fine work.
14Self-DissectedPsycheA brilliant telling of the painting "Saturn" (I'm assuming). I absolutely love how you truly turned the painting into a story. Macabre, visually visceral, all words, images and lines written powerfully to support the whole. "And heaving the bundle/Devouring his child" man that final line gave me chills! Fine work, DAMN fine work.
11/21/2010 c1 167nickyO
I think you succeeded with the imagery. It is chilling and the pace and rhythm of the poem is steady as a sure footstep.
167nickyOI think you succeeded with the imagery. It is chilling and the pace and rhythm of the poem is steady as a sure footstep.
8/21/2010 c1 194Anthony Tesla
Incredible piece of work: twisted, dark. good figures of speech and a nice rhytm, I really liked
It's hard to write poetry of this kind because most of authors end up making a very cheesy or corny works, but you knew how to handle it
194Anthony TeslaIncredible piece of work: twisted, dark. good figures of speech and a nice rhytm, I really liked
It's hard to write poetry of this kind because most of authors end up making a very cheesy or corny works, but you knew how to handle it