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for Satan Devours His Child

5/10/2012 c1 16Meadow Frost
wow, vary good, it flows well, and the imagery is really good.
4/30/2012 c1 14Self-DissectedPsyche
A brilliant telling of the painting "Saturn" (I'm assuming). I absolutely love how you truly turned the painting into a story. Macabre, visually visceral, all words, images and lines written powerfully to support the whole. "And heaving the bundle/Devouring his child" man that final line gave me chills! Fine work, DAMN fine work.
11/21/2010 c1 167nickyO
I think you succeeded with the imagery. It is chilling and the pace and rhythm of the poem is steady as a sure footstep.
8/21/2010 c1 194Anthony Tesla
Incredible piece of work: twisted, dark. good figures of speech and a nice rhytm, I really liked

It's hard to write poetry of this kind because most of authors end up making a very cheesy or corny works, but you knew how to handle it

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