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6/19/2010 c1 10Mouse Penn
Haha. I thought like her date died, but no, just her nails :D Nice job.
6/13/2010 c1 30Robert Orville Berkshire
So much drama, knitted together with the most cliche of descriptions, and the climax is! . . .

I quite like it, but the summary gave it away, unfortunately.
6/10/2010 c1 Javin Pilotte
Haha, I really did laugh at the end.

It rhymed, but this one flowed, and the rhyming wasn't even that obvious. I only noticed after the fourth line, because I was too busy reading all the effects and dramatized reactions. I didn't notice because it flowed so well. xD But it was really good to do that. :D You're really good at writing poems.
6/9/2010 c1 1dreamergurl-02
This is nice, i love the twist at the end xD
6/9/2010 c1 lili999
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6/7/2010 c1 free-spirit23
I love how you dramatized the horror, it's what girls are known to specialize in ;). I also love the ending, it made me laugh, and you said it would be funny. You didn't let me down good job, and thanks for the review :).
6/3/2010 c1 18DeathAngels1996
lol. seriously? I started reading it expecting somthing terrible and then it says, "I broke my nails the day before junior prom," And I'm just thinking wow... but it was really funny. Good Job!
6/3/2010 c1 7BreakfastMuncher
Hahahaha.

That is great.

I was thinking she bought the wrong lipstick or something.

But hahaha her nail? That is great.

:)
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