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6/4/2010 c1 18Open your eyes Chopstick
I liked it. It shows a confliction within the narrator, and to my own personal belief. There were some spelling errors, but I'm figuring you noticed them after the story was posted and is too lazy to change it. :)

Do you mind R&R my stories/poems too? Thanks!

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