for Provenance II: Still Alive7/21/2015 c25 augmentedDREAMS
I like this story better than the prequel. Actually, I hated the prequel but I have positive feelings for this story.
I hated Georgia's character so much in the beginning of the prequel, but throughout this story, I have like her. I feel for her and Kenneth.
I am very glad that this story is different from the prequel. The prequel was all about sex and what Ashland wants Ashland gets and more sex. Frankly, the characters had no personality in that story and the entire story was so one-toned and one-dimensional I can't even begin to tell.
BUT... I am very pleased with this story. It is clear that you have improved in your writing and I am glad to see that you actually attempt to give Kenneth and Georgia actual feelings and personalities. I was so happy to see that unlike the previous one this story was not all about wild sex and whatnot but about Kenneth's and Georgia's feelings and them coming to terms with their mating. I love it that you have shown Kenneth and Georgia actually attempt to love each other and work on their relationship and understanding each other instead of them just having sex and calling it a day (unlike in the PREQUEL!)
I don't know why you didn't like the sunset date chapter. I actually thought that was a great one. For the readers as well as the characters. It felt that Kenneth and Georgia got to communicate at such an intimate level for the first time. It showed how much Kenneth is trying and how much he actually does love her and how it is not about taking the guy (like you so smartly mentioned in the prequel epilogue- which I hated), but that he is a person who wants to someday have a family of his own.
I prefer this story so much over the prequel. I am not at all sorry for saying this but I absolutely LOATHED the prequel. All of the characters had their priorities wrong and there was hardly any voice of reason. I was greatly disappointed in the entire story especially the epilogue, it was just as if it completely dashed my hopes of the story improving eventually. But I am glad to see that you have done justice to Georgia's story.
I loved Georgia's character (in this story and this story only. I hated everyone in the prequel.), but I still hate Marilein and Phoebe. Kenneth is great. He has just the right amount of tortured soul going for him and along with his desire to make things work his character is pretty hard to hate. I hope you come back to this story soon. After reading the prequel, I had absolutely no expectations from this story. I don't even know why I decided to read it, but I'm glad I did.
I like this story better than the prequel. Actually, I hated the prequel but I have positive feelings for this story.
I hated Georgia's character so much in the beginning of the prequel, but throughout this story, I have like her. I feel for her and Kenneth.
I am very glad that this story is different from the prequel. The prequel was all about sex and what Ashland wants Ashland gets and more sex. Frankly, the characters had no personality in that story and the entire story was so one-toned and one-dimensional I can't even begin to tell.
BUT... I am very pleased with this story. It is clear that you have improved in your writing and I am glad to see that you actually attempt to give Kenneth and Georgia actual feelings and personalities. I was so happy to see that unlike the previous one this story was not all about wild sex and whatnot but about Kenneth's and Georgia's feelings and them coming to terms with their mating. I love it that you have shown Kenneth and Georgia actually attempt to love each other and work on their relationship and understanding each other instead of them just having sex and calling it a day (unlike in the PREQUEL!)
I don't know why you didn't like the sunset date chapter. I actually thought that was a great one. For the readers as well as the characters. It felt that Kenneth and Georgia got to communicate at such an intimate level for the first time. It showed how much Kenneth is trying and how much he actually does love her and how it is not about taking the guy (like you so smartly mentioned in the prequel epilogue- which I hated), but that he is a person who wants to someday have a family of his own.
I prefer this story so much over the prequel. I am not at all sorry for saying this but I absolutely LOATHED the prequel. All of the characters had their priorities wrong and there was hardly any voice of reason. I was greatly disappointed in the entire story especially the epilogue, it was just as if it completely dashed my hopes of the story improving eventually. But I am glad to see that you have done justice to Georgia's story.
I loved Georgia's character (in this story and this story only. I hated everyone in the prequel.), but I still hate Marilein and Phoebe. Kenneth is great. He has just the right amount of tortured soul going for him and along with his desire to make things work his character is pretty hard to hate. I hope you come back to this story soon. After reading the prequel, I had absolutely no expectations from this story. I don't even know why I decided to read it, but I'm glad I did.
2/25/2015 c20 Guest
I love phoebe for calling Georgia out! She needs to stop lecturing people about their relationships when she clearly can't handle her own!
I love phoebe for calling Georgia out! She needs to stop lecturing people about their relationships when she clearly can't handle her own!
7/15/2014 c1 
3ColdWinter12
I love this story! I kind of wish that Kenny and Georgia can finally end their endless cycle of abuse to each other. They really do deserve more. I've read Provenance I a couple of months ago when I would read it before class, but I really do love your story and the characters! I rediscovered your stories again and fell in love again. I hope you update this story soon because the two of them really deserve to be happy together!
3ColdWinter12I love this story! I kind of wish that Kenny and Georgia can finally end their endless cycle of abuse to each other. They really do deserve more. I've read Provenance I a couple of months ago when I would read it before class, but I really do love your story and the characters! I rediscovered your stories again and fell in love again. I hope you update this story soon because the two of them really deserve to be happy together!
7/5/2014 c25 1cha2010chi
It's been so long since this story was updated I hope you haven't forgotten about it. I like the complexity around Kenneth and George's relationship I just wish that it seemed like they were progressing as that I'm staying in the same place. No I am happy to see Georgia isn't running away from Kenneth as much as she was and I hope they can finally start a family and be happy and realize they love each other
1cha2010chiIt's been so long since this story was updated I hope you haven't forgotten about it. I like the complexity around Kenneth and George's relationship I just wish that it seemed like they were progressing as that I'm staying in the same place. No I am happy to see Georgia isn't running away from Kenneth as much as she was and I hope they can finally start a family and be happy and realize they love each other
9/13/2013 c9 1nadali
I was waiting to see how many chapters it would take for Georgia to get a back bone.
I was waiting to see how many chapters it would take for Georgia to get a back bone.
7/12/2013 c25 sally n
update plz:-)
update plz:-)
7/2/2013 c25 Dina
Why did you leave us and stop updating? PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm begging you, I've read and re-read this story about 10 times.
Why did you leave us and stop updating? PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm begging you, I've read and re-read this story about 10 times.
5/17/2013 c7 amy the writer
You, Kangae no Hinansho, said that they was four pups, right? Right. Where is the four one?
You, Kangae no Hinansho, said that they was four pups, right? Right. Where is the four one?
5/15/2013 c18 amy the writer
I'm sorry but, I forgot. What is a half life? Quick but, in fulling details, please. Thanks.
I'm sorry but, I forgot. What is a half life? Quick but, in fulling details, please. Thanks.
5/15/2013 c25 Ck90
Yeah, Umm a little scared right now... Georgia needs to have better taste in men.
Yeah, Umm a little scared right now... Georgia needs to have better taste in men.
5/13/2013 c25 A
But wait, I don't understand. If we're not going to hear about the Coalition anymore... why is there a full chapter of them? Or of Alex? Will it all be explained later? Also, Alex is terrifying...
But wait, I don't understand. If we're not going to hear about the Coalition anymore... why is there a full chapter of them? Or of Alex? Will it all be explained later? Also, Alex is terrifying...
5/11/2013 c25 2akaCHEEKS
Thank goodness Georgia didn't choose Alex! Wow, it's been a long time since I reviewed this story! I'm so lost on what's going on. How does Alex fit into this? (I'm assuming he works for the Coalition). Is Ashland's pack the largest in the country? Is that why the Coalition is so focused on them? And when will Georgia start using the knowledge she learned about werewolf culture/practices? Wasn't it mentioned in Marilein's story that Georgia studied wolf culture or something in college? As a supposed expert, you would think Georgia would know how to navigate her relationship with Kenneth...
2akaCHEEKSThank goodness Georgia didn't choose Alex! Wow, it's been a long time since I reviewed this story! I'm so lost on what's going on. How does Alex fit into this? (I'm assuming he works for the Coalition). Is Ashland's pack the largest in the country? Is that why the Coalition is so focused on them? And when will Georgia start using the knowledge she learned about werewolf culture/practices? Wasn't it mentioned in Marilein's story that Georgia studied wolf culture or something in college? As a supposed expert, you would think Georgia would know how to navigate her relationship with Kenneth...