for Comet2/23/2011 c31 
31HeroofEnelios
Rough training eh? But what doesn't kill them, makes them stronger right? The typical saying for people like them. Sigh... oh well. Great, great job with this chapter!
31HeroofEneliosRough training eh? But what doesn't kill them, makes them stronger right? The typical saying for people like them. Sigh... oh well. Great, great job with this chapter!
2/13/2011 c30 HeroofEnelios
Ha ha! Book 2 and going strong still. An awesome start and Tig never ceases to amaze me. As for the rest of the gang... we'll just see. Hm... anyways great start and I can't wait to read more. :)
Ha ha! Book 2 and going strong still. An awesome start and Tig never ceases to amaze me. As for the rest of the gang... we'll just see. Hm... anyways great start and I can't wait to read more. :)
1/27/2011 c1 Tim
Hey just picked up a typo
Wren chuckled and shook his head at her. "Your incoordination is going to get your killed one day. Really, you must be one of the clumsiest Qen I know."
Should be 'Uncoordination' not 'in'
good story so far, keep up the good work.
T
Hey just picked up a typo
Wren chuckled and shook his head at her. "Your incoordination is going to get your killed one day. Really, you must be one of the clumsiest Qen I know."
Should be 'Uncoordination' not 'in'
good story so far, keep up the good work.
T
1/22/2011 c29 HeroofEnelios
Now that I've read the end of this book, I really cannot wait for Morning Star to come out and I am very excited. You are a great writer, and I am happy to be reading your works. Can't wait for book 2!
Now that I've read the end of this book, I really cannot wait for Morning Star to come out and I am very excited. You are a great writer, and I am happy to be reading your works. Can't wait for book 2!
1/19/2011 c28 HeroofEnelios
This is getting really, intense. Wow. Several excellent fight scenes, I enjoyed each and every one of them. I can't wait for the next chapter, excellent job.
You're a great writer! :)
This is getting really, intense. Wow. Several excellent fight scenes, I enjoyed each and every one of them. I can't wait for the next chapter, excellent job.
You're a great writer! :)
1/18/2011 c24 hikarii-chan
yay im thanked =) i still dnt get sileny but i thinik she may b good.. heehee.. i lyke acar rei
yay im thanked =) i still dnt get sileny but i thinik she may b good.. heehee.. i lyke acar rei
1/18/2011 c23 hikarii-chan
idk wut to think about sileny. she is so weird i cnt kno if shes evil or good. i lyke her but i dnt. miry is mean :(
idk wut to think about sileny. she is so weird i cnt kno if shes evil or good. i lyke her but i dnt. miry is mean :(
1/17/2011 c27 HeroofEnelios
At first I felt sympathy for Sileny, but now that I know she is just faking being a good person and really is just bad, I have lost all sympathy towards her. That lying, cheating, brat. Oh well... an awesome chapter like usual!
At first I felt sympathy for Sileny, but now that I know she is just faking being a good person and really is just bad, I have lost all sympathy towards her. That lying, cheating, brat. Oh well... an awesome chapter like usual!
1/17/2011 c20 firemuffs
I thought Echo was suppose to be the first to see Tig? Not Wren, what a dick.
I thought Echo was suppose to be the first to see Tig? Not Wren, what a dick.