
7/29/2010 c1 SibJr
That was such a beautiful story. You described her so well and made her so vivid. And this story teaches such a huge lesson: not to say goodbye to something that you don't want gone. It's such a tragic story too, but I guess that just makes it stronger.
That was such a beautiful story. You described her so well and made her so vivid. And this story teaches such a huge lesson: not to say goodbye to something that you don't want gone. It's such a tragic story too, but I guess that just makes it stronger.
6/10/2010 c1
3koreamerica
amazing :)
You're description of the girl was so great. You're truly talented :D

amazing :)
You're description of the girl was so great. You're truly talented :D
6/9/2010 c1
5RokitToMars
Aw, I love the last line.
It's so bittersweet.
Your description of her was absolutely wonderful.
The perfect balance of pretty and personality.
Good job (: Very sweet.

Aw, I love the last line.
It's so bittersweet.
Your description of her was absolutely wonderful.
The perfect balance of pretty and personality.
Good job (: Very sweet.