for A Little Bit of Something7/6/2022 c7 Guest
I really enjoyed your story but i have to keep my emotions under control.. I'm Iraqi and i have lost my father, long side a couple of friends in this damned war and no one of them was in army.. he was just passing by going home from work when an American soldier shot him for no reason at all just bcz he felt like it. I know there r many good American soldiers out there and many families suffered from your side but i hope your story won't go to that path and portray my ppl as some kind of uncivilized villains as some foreign channels like to brainwash ppl into thinking like that when in reality many of them were just fending for themselves.. I'm sorry i just couldn't help it and thought I'd mention this even tho it's too late for that. Keep up the good work
I really enjoyed your story but i have to keep my emotions under control.. I'm Iraqi and i have lost my father, long side a couple of friends in this damned war and no one of them was in army.. he was just passing by going home from work when an American soldier shot him for no reason at all just bcz he felt like it. I know there r many good American soldiers out there and many families suffered from your side but i hope your story won't go to that path and portray my ppl as some kind of uncivilized villains as some foreign channels like to brainwash ppl into thinking like that when in reality many of them were just fending for themselves.. I'm sorry i just couldn't help it and thought I'd mention this even tho it's too late for that. Keep up the good work
1/7/2017 c20 Guest
it's been years but I'm hoping you'll finish this story. Warrick and jordan deserve a happy ending
it's been years but I'm hoping you'll finish this story. Warrick and jordan deserve a happy ending
7/13/2015 c27 J.V.S
I'm probably not going to receive any response to my request but I've gotta try so here goes... Please end this story it breaks my heart not knowing if Warrick and Jordan stayed together and what about Raphael he deserves to fall in love at first sight then there's Kale and Chris and lets not forget Spencer whatever happened to him and last but not least Jordan and Raphael's parents. Its 2015 I don't know if you even read these anymore but I'm keeping my fingers crossed...
I'm probably not going to receive any response to my request but I've gotta try so here goes... Please end this story it breaks my heart not knowing if Warrick and Jordan stayed together and what about Raphael he deserves to fall in love at first sight then there's Kale and Chris and lets not forget Spencer whatever happened to him and last but not least Jordan and Raphael's parents. Its 2015 I don't know if you even read these anymore but I'm keeping my fingers crossed...
6/18/2013 c27 Renewed.Ransom
First off let me start by saying, I'm so glad I found this little story. And I'm really enjoying it, even though I sort of cheated right from the get go by reading this chapter first, but I did read chapter one before skipping, which counts!
Ha-ha, anyway. Your writing is spectacular and spot on. I love stories about military heroes, including romances. Jordan is a very captivating character and I'm going to go back and try to understand what has happened to Jordan and what went on with her kidnapper. Warrick sounds like a great character and has that ounce of protectiveness and stability that I found charmingly attractive. I just really hope everything works out in their relationship.
First off let me start by saying, I'm so glad I found this little story. And I'm really enjoying it, even though I sort of cheated right from the get go by reading this chapter first, but I did read chapter one before skipping, which counts!
Ha-ha, anyway. Your writing is spectacular and spot on. I love stories about military heroes, including romances. Jordan is a very captivating character and I'm going to go back and try to understand what has happened to Jordan and what went on with her kidnapper. Warrick sounds like a great character and has that ounce of protectiveness and stability that I found charmingly attractive. I just really hope everything works out in their relationship.
3/4/2013 c27 mylittleprincess
please finish this story.
please finish this story.
1/20/2013 c27 Guest
Are you planning to finish this story? If not, I will remove it from my favorites. I liked the story and would like to know what your plans are for it. Thanks!
Are you planning to finish this story? If not, I will remove it from my favorites. I liked the story and would like to know what your plans are for it. Thanks!
6/26/2012 c27 Taylor
I dont know wat is taking you so long to update im beggin pleading groveling please this story seems like its almost done please finish it oh and some constructive criticism in a FEW stories you tend to rush the endin or try and skip past things and not fully explain things but still i love the stories none the less got a very creative mind *thumbs up*:)
I dont know wat is taking you so long to update im beggin pleading groveling please this story seems like its almost done please finish it oh and some constructive criticism in a FEW stories you tend to rush the endin or try and skip past things and not fully explain things but still i love the stories none the less got a very creative mind *thumbs up*:)
5/6/2012 c27 
1Ceri Anne
So. I lied. I DID end up reading this... hey ho! I think this is a lot better written than a little bit of everything (although there is one thing that keeps grating on my nerves, you keep writing 'foreword' instead of 'forward' but that's just a little thing). I really really hope you update soon cause I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. P.S I can completely understand why Jordan doesn't want Warrick seeing her scars!
1Ceri AnneSo. I lied. I DID end up reading this... hey ho! I think this is a lot better written than a little bit of everything (although there is one thing that keeps grating on my nerves, you keep writing 'foreword' instead of 'forward' but that's just a little thing). I really really hope you update soon cause I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. P.S I can completely understand why Jordan doesn't want Warrick seeing her scars!
3/1/2012 c27 Nocturnal-Silver-Wolf
Well, it was pretty good. Scratch that. IT WAS AWESOME. But then I do agree that if I were Jordan there would be no way that I would go back to Warrick, I mean I would "break up" with him to torture him a bit more. :) *Grins sadistically*
Warrick, come to visit me now! Lol
I wanna have his sweater now - the one that smells like him. Send it to me plz if you aren't going to visit!
Well, it was pretty good. Scratch that. IT WAS AWESOME. But then I do agree that if I were Jordan there would be no way that I would go back to Warrick, I mean I would "break up" with him to torture him a bit more. :) *Grins sadistically*
Warrick, come to visit me now! Lol
I wanna have his sweater now - the one that smells like him. Send it to me plz if you aren't going to visit!
2/24/2012 c2 witeaya
i was cleaning my alert list and i saw this story!
missing it would be an understatement when i was rereading parts of the story.
hoping you'll find it in yourself to continue with with the story.
pls?
i was cleaning my alert list and i saw this story!
missing it would be an understatement when i was rereading parts of the story.
hoping you'll find it in yourself to continue with with the story.
pls?
2/22/2012 c27 Alixermixer
I really hope that you find you muse again and come back and finish this story for your faithful readers. I think that this break will be good for them to fix themselves and hopefully they will find themselves back together!
I really hope that you find you muse again and come back and finish this story for your faithful readers. I think that this break will be good for them to fix themselves and hopefully they will find themselves back together!
2/18/2012 c27 shopoholic06
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon :( this is one of my absolute fav story on fictionpress n it seriously makes me really sad that there isn't an ending yet :(
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon :( this is one of my absolute fav story on fictionpress n it seriously makes me really sad that there isn't an ending yet :(
1/13/2012 c27 Lady R
Hi! This is not much of a review but a comment. I just so happened to check on the story and saw the last update as being 1/9/11. I got so excited that there was an update a few days ago. Then I realized we are no longer in 2011 but 2012! Boy was I disappointed. :( Oh well, even if it has been a year since the last update, I hope you haven't given up on this story.
Hi! This is not much of a review but a comment. I just so happened to check on the story and saw the last update as being 1/9/11. I got so excited that there was an update a few days ago. Then I realized we are no longer in 2011 but 2012! Boy was I disappointed. :( Oh well, even if it has been a year since the last update, I hope you haven't given up on this story.