for The Candy King6/24/2010 c3 dakota s
i love how she cusses ;) update soon please!
i love how she cusses ;) update soon please!
6/24/2010 c3 
4predict.this
Very interesting! I'm loving this story so far. (: I love the "holy fudge-flying cows from hell" bit.
4predict.thisVery interesting! I'm loving this story so far. (: I love the "holy fudge-flying cows from hell" bit.
6/23/2010 c2 3Quixoticisms
Hello!
Sorry I haven't come around to replying/reviewing until now. You don't know how glad I am that you're back, though-I've missed Royce and Quaid quite a bit.
(My rather-important tests are coming in four days and I've barely started studying-and all in favour of fictionpress, no less. Heh.)
Anyway, just wanted to say that I like your new rewrite (even though I thought the old one was fine originally) and am eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)
3QuixoticismsHello!
Sorry I haven't come around to replying/reviewing until now. You don't know how glad I am that you're back, though-I've missed Royce and Quaid quite a bit.
(My rather-important tests are coming in four days and I've barely started studying-and all in favour of fictionpress, no less. Heh.)
Anyway, just wanted to say that I like your new rewrite (even though I thought the old one was fine originally) and am eagerly anticipating the next chapter :)
6/22/2010 c2 5Chris Rhyanne
HE'S BACK! MY WONDERFUL WILLY WONKA WANNABE IS BACK! *kisses* You have no idea how much I missed this story. When I found out it was gone, my heart fell from my chest and splatted sadly onto my bedroom floor. I cried. But it's back! So I forgive you.
Ah! And I love what you've done to the place! The writing seems to be even better, if that were possible! I love the new introduction with Royce, but it was a little awkward to hear him called 'Candy King' in such a serious setting. But... It doesn't change a thing.
I LOVE YOU. Update soon.
5Chris RhyanneHE'S BACK! MY WONDERFUL WILLY WONKA WANNABE IS BACK! *kisses* You have no idea how much I missed this story. When I found out it was gone, my heart fell from my chest and splatted sadly onto my bedroom floor. I cried. But it's back! So I forgive you.
Ah! And I love what you've done to the place! The writing seems to be even better, if that were possible! I love the new introduction with Royce, but it was a little awkward to hear him called 'Candy King' in such a serious setting. But... It doesn't change a thing.
I LOVE YOU. Update soon.
6/20/2010 c1 Charlee Rayne
hehe. I did think it was a typo.
ANYWAY! I loved your story! More than anything the first time I read it. Jeez. I think i reveiwed for EVERY chapter. I couldn't wait for the next one to come out!
hehe. I did think it was a typo.
ANYWAY! I loved your story! More than anything the first time I read it. Jeez. I think i reveiwed for EVERY chapter. I couldn't wait for the next one to come out!
6/19/2010 c2 CaitlinEA
Omg omg omg!
Yay!
Omg are Quaids friends from the original version of this story going to be in this version? I hope so. And what about Quaids ballroom dance teacher? What her name? Sarah? Is she going to be in this version too? I really hope so. Cant wait for more chapters!
Update soon!
Omg omg omg!
Yay!
Omg are Quaids friends from the original version of this story going to be in this version? I hope so. And what about Quaids ballroom dance teacher? What her name? Sarah? Is she going to be in this version too? I really hope so. Cant wait for more chapters!
Update soon!
6/19/2010 c2 4Aspiemor
This really brings back such nostalgia. I so remember Quaid, her boss, sisters, heck her whole life. Your last version was good and this version is gearing up to be even better. I am willing to say your story is what my story would be if I could write.
4AspiemorThis really brings back such nostalgia. I so remember Quaid, her boss, sisters, heck her whole life. Your last version was good and this version is gearing up to be even better. I am willing to say your story is what my story would be if I could write.
6/19/2010 c2 3That One Dork Stacey
Woot Woot! Finally :P I can get some Quaid and Royce interaction soon. :D Can't wait for it to actually happen!
Update soon!
Oh, and thanks for the...thanks? lol
-Stace :]
3That One Dork StaceyWoot Woot! Finally :P I can get some Quaid and Royce interaction soon. :D Can't wait for it to actually happen!
Update soon!
Oh, and thanks for the...thanks? lol
-Stace :]
6/19/2010 c2 GrinningFox
Lovely so far, i can't wait to read more :)
Lovely so far, i can't wait to read more :)
6/19/2010 c2 Cybernetic
Deep hollows under his eyes showed the sleepless nights he endured, repairing the books I would deliver to him every few days.
Slight pov shift, you might wanna get that looked at. :)
I can't wait til Candyman shows up.
Deep hollows under his eyes showed the sleepless nights he endured, repairing the books I would deliver to him every few days.
Slight pov shift, you might wanna get that looked at. :)
I can't wait til Candyman shows up.
6/19/2010 c2 2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
Oh man update soon please.!. I really can't wait to meet the demon.!. :P
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiCOh man update soon please.!. I really can't wait to meet the demon.!. :P
6/13/2010 c1 HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
Seems... interesting.
I can't remember what your first version of this was like so hopefully the next chapter might remind me.
Update soon please :)
Seems... interesting.
I can't remember what your first version of this was like so hopefully the next chapter might remind me.
Update soon please :)
6/13/2010 c1 4Aspiemor
I for one am glad you are back. I have missed this story and I hope you finish this version. Ah Royce, I feel like I have been missing an old friend. Well so far this rewrite looks to be a good start. I am still debating on posting the rewrite of Journeyman Shaman. If you go to my recent note on DA you will see. Later!
4AspiemorI for one am glad you are back. I have missed this story and I hope you finish this version. Ah Royce, I feel like I have been missing an old friend. Well so far this rewrite looks to be a good start. I am still debating on posting the rewrite of Journeyman Shaman. If you go to my recent note on DA you will see. Later!
6/12/2010 c1 4AbbieLou
I'm happy that you are updating this story again. I remember the first version and this one seems to be a lot different, at least, so far. It seems like it is going to be a lot more detailed which I like. I'm looking forward to seeing what changes and what stays the same and just reading the story again. :)
4AbbieLouI'm happy that you are updating this story again. I remember the first version and this one seems to be a lot different, at least, so far. It seems like it is going to be a lot more detailed which I like. I'm looking forward to seeing what changes and what stays the same and just reading the story again. :)