for The Candy King8/29/2011 c1 
3ShadowWraith555
'I live to be seen.'
That sent chills down my spine. And that's why I love Royce. Finally I figured out how to do this on my phone. This is more exceptionally well written than from what I can remember last time (and even that was a treasure!). And so completes the first of many reviews I will do. ^^
3ShadowWraith555'I live to be seen.'
That sent chills down my spine. And that's why I love Royce. Finally I figured out how to do this on my phone. This is more exceptionally well written than from what I can remember last time (and even that was a treasure!). And so completes the first of many reviews I will do. ^^
8/26/2011 c17 1Susan Holt
This is brilliant! I love the encounters between Quaid and Royce!
I just finished reading all the chapters! I wish you could update soon! :)))
You're doing a good job! Keep it up!
1Susan HoltThis is brilliant! I love the encounters between Quaid and Royce!
I just finished reading all the chapters! I wish you could update soon! :)))
You're doing a good job! Keep it up!
7/31/2011 c17 Nijello
Awesome! I, CANNOT, WAIT, FOR, ANOTHER, CHAPTER! This really pulled my attention in, thank you so much for a fantastic read! :)
Awesome! I, CANNOT, WAIT, FOR, ANOTHER, CHAPTER! This really pulled my attention in, thank you so much for a fantastic read! :)
7/29/2011 c17 lemontea-addict
Love love love! Quaid I'd adorable and her mind kid Louise is super cute! So is Seras candy kings mistress in disguise? And why does she have to learn etiqutte? I hope you update soon!
Love love love! Quaid I'd adorable and her mind kid Louise is super cute! So is Seras candy kings mistress in disguise? And why does she have to learn etiqutte? I hope you update soon!
7/17/2011 c17 1MusicxDisaster
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I've been managing for a month! A MONTH! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! UPDATE ALREADY T^T^T^T^T^T^T^T
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I've been managing for a month! A MONTH! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! UPDATE ALREADY T^T^T^T^T^T^T^T
7/1/2011 c17 LarkasBlessing
Ok so I found this story and did not think I would like it soooo much. I love the characters, and have a feeling that Royce's mistress is related to Quiad's new tutor. Just a slight hunch. Or a big one. Whatever. So. Can't wait to see what happens next! till next time!
~Larka
Ok so I found this story and did not think I would like it soooo much. I love the characters, and have a feeling that Royce's mistress is related to Quiad's new tutor. Just a slight hunch. Or a big one. Whatever. So. Can't wait to see what happens next! till next time!
~Larka
6/19/2011 c17 aabidabi
Soooo glad I found this story
It's not like any of the other demon stories out there
The whole candy thing is very unique
Update soon!
Soooo glad I found this story
It's not like any of the other demon stories out there
The whole candy thing is very unique
Update soon!
6/18/2011 c17 4Aspiemor
Well this was a very quant peaceful chapter. I kind of get Royce is a pit possessive of her. Well seeing as her soul belongs to him. He's not about to let anyone steal his woman darnit! Well is she really his woman? I did like the way you displayed possession. Demonic possession has always interested me. Well possession in general. Just something about another being controlling your body. I dunno makes good story fuel.
Although I think her sisters could have acted a bit more surprised to see their sister up and about after 4 days. But that is just me.
Keep up the good work!
4AspiemorWell this was a very quant peaceful chapter. I kind of get Royce is a pit possessive of her. Well seeing as her soul belongs to him. He's not about to let anyone steal his woman darnit! Well is she really his woman? I did like the way you displayed possession. Demonic possession has always interested me. Well possession in general. Just something about another being controlling your body. I dunno makes good story fuel.
Although I think her sisters could have acted a bit more surprised to see their sister up and about after 4 days. But that is just me.
Keep up the good work!
6/16/2011 c17 2lazy2login
OMG! I am so loving this! Keep up the brilliant work! ^^
OMG! I am so loving this! Keep up the brilliant work! ^^
6/12/2011 c17 Silvermoon of Forestclan
*wave hands frantically* you can't leave it like that! Please update soon!
-Silvermoon
*wave hands frantically* you can't leave it like that! Please update soon!
-Silvermoon
6/12/2011 c4 Silvermoon of Forestclan
Trying really, really hard not to laugh because I was supposed to be asleep several hour ago...
Trying really, really hard not to laugh because I was supposed to be asleep several hour ago...
6/12/2011 c1 Silvermoon of Forestclan
Hi! You might want to fix the repetition here: 'the night lilies that turned their violet petals that turned their heads towards the rifts'
And then you talk about the aelf before saying 'so expressive of his feelings. Then again, all ylfe were like that.' Which spelling is right?
Very good imagery you portrayed.
-Silvermoon
Hi! You might want to fix the repetition here: 'the night lilies that turned their violet petals that turned their heads towards the rifts'
And then you talk about the aelf before saying 'so expressive of his feelings. Then again, all ylfe were like that.' Which spelling is right?
Very good imagery you portrayed.
-Silvermoon
6/11/2011 c17 6Carmel March
Super duper chapter! I'm loving the relationship between Quaid and Royce. Please update as soon as you can! :)
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchSuper duper chapter! I'm loving the relationship between Quaid and Royce. Please update as soon as you can! :)
~Carm~
6/10/2011 c17 4J.L. Lofthouse
Hey love the story but I am a bit confused who is everyone again and if royce is single then why does he have a mistress? If you don't mind could you fill me in on what's happened so far in the story just because I have read so many stories that they seem to mix together so if its not to much bother it would be much appreciated :)
4J.L. LofthouseHey love the story but I am a bit confused who is everyone again and if royce is single then why does he have a mistress? If you don't mind could you fill me in on what's happened so far in the story just because I have read so many stories that they seem to mix together so if its not to much bother it would be much appreciated :)