for The Candy King2/8/2011 c13 
6Missing Information
dundun! Omg, when I got the email saying you had updated it made my day. Not even joking. You amaze me. This is so good. I simply adore this story. Poor Prudence D:
6Missing Informationdundun! Omg, when I got the email saying you had updated it made my day. Not even joking. You amaze me. This is so good. I simply adore this story. Poor Prudence D:
2/8/2011 c13 Lillian Snow
Ah I remember reading this in the first draft, I loved this part of the story. X3 can't wait for more. This was awesome.
Ah I remember reading this in the first draft, I loved this part of the story. X3 can't wait for more. This was awesome.
2/8/2011 c13 2muchreading
OMG! What a good update. What will she do? Can't wait until the next update.
OMG! What a good update. What will she do? Can't wait until the next update.
2/6/2011 c12 Xandrea
This was an interesting chapter. I love how Royce messed with her at the end. Very funny. Can't wait for the next update, :)
This was an interesting chapter. I love how Royce messed with her at the end. Very funny. Can't wait for the next update, :)
1/27/2011 c12 Missing Information
OMG, wow, I actually really really like this. When I first clicked it I wasn't sure, but after reading these last few chapters. It's so good. It's not at all what I expected. I hope you update regularly. Its so good
OMG, wow, I actually really really like this. When I first clicked it I wasn't sure, but after reading these last few chapters. It's so good. It's not at all what I expected. I hope you update regularly. Its so good
1/24/2011 c12 xofallenangelxx
Awesome ! Update soon!
Awesome ! Update soon!
1/23/2011 c12 4Aspiemor
Ah so we have reached this part of the rewrite. I remember this well. And I have to say it was as good as the last version. Nice bit on her father I have to say. So far this story is going great and I found nothing wrong with this chapter.
4AspiemorAh so we have reached this part of the rewrite. I remember this well. And I have to say it was as good as the last version. Nice bit on her father I have to say. So far this story is going great and I found nothing wrong with this chapter.
1/23/2011 c12 Zethoa
You've gotta love Royce, I'll say that for him.
Not sure where this whole etiquette deal is going, but I found the bits about handshakes and toasting quite interesting.
You've gotta love Royce, I'll say that for him.
Not sure where this whole etiquette deal is going, but I found the bits about handshakes and toasting quite interesting.
1/23/2011 c12 Lillian Snow
Heheheh... XD Royce is so freakin hilarious. Short but sweet chapter :)
Heheheh... XD Royce is so freakin hilarious. Short but sweet chapter :)
1/23/2011 c12 11KT-ImmortalIncarnate
Oh! I like this chapter. Sorry I haven't been a good reviewer lately, I've been occupied. But I have been reading!
It's pretty good, you've really improved!
Nice job with the yawning, =P poor Quaid, paranoia is no fun.
Royce is pretty fun though, I like him.
KT{ImmortalIncarnate}
11KT-ImmortalIncarnateOh! I like this chapter. Sorry I haven't been a good reviewer lately, I've been occupied. But I have been reading!
It's pretty good, you've really improved!
Nice job with the yawning, =P poor Quaid, paranoia is no fun.
Royce is pretty fun though, I like him.
KT{ImmortalIncarnate}
1/23/2011 c12 9StarryNyx
Haha, oh my goodness. Quaid taking etiquette lessons is truly a sight to behold. But, of course, you find a way to make it even more interesting by inserting Royce into the situation. Oh, that demon. So bad, yet so good, am I right? :) "A spider..." that had me in stitches. I can't WAIT to see how she blows up at him for this. Update soon?
9StarryNyxHaha, oh my goodness. Quaid taking etiquette lessons is truly a sight to behold. But, of course, you find a way to make it even more interesting by inserting Royce into the situation. Oh, that demon. So bad, yet so good, am I right? :) "A spider..." that had me in stitches. I can't WAIT to see how she blows up at him for this. Update soon?
1/19/2011 c11 StarryNyx
Ah, long time, no talk :(
I'm terribly sorry that I haven't been able to read your updates...I've been so darn busy lately that any and all free time has escaped me. But finally, finally, I'm all caught up!
And boy, I'm glad I am. This story keeps getting better. Royce, despite being a demon, never fails to be amusing and sexy and awesome all at the same time. And Quaid...oh, Quaid. Your life just doesn't get easier, does it? Hah. But I guess that's why we love her. Congratulations, Jadeon scares the poop out of me...he's a really well-written character, but I completely fear what he's going to do. And Asmodeus is simply fascinating...I can only wonder what kind of secret he has. Oh well...guess this means you're going to have to update soon :) Keep it up; I love it!
Ah, long time, no talk :(
I'm terribly sorry that I haven't been able to read your updates...I've been so darn busy lately that any and all free time has escaped me. But finally, finally, I'm all caught up!
And boy, I'm glad I am. This story keeps getting better. Royce, despite being a demon, never fails to be amusing and sexy and awesome all at the same time. And Quaid...oh, Quaid. Your life just doesn't get easier, does it? Hah. But I guess that's why we love her. Congratulations, Jadeon scares the poop out of me...he's a really well-written character, but I completely fear what he's going to do. And Asmodeus is simply fascinating...I can only wonder what kind of secret he has. Oh well...guess this means you're going to have to update soon :) Keep it up; I love it!
1/1/2011 c11 Zethoa
Interesting chapter. I like the hell bits, even though the way they're interspersed with the rest of the story is a bit confusing. But the ferrymen were very interesting, as were the demonic species.
Just a thing to watch though, Asmodeus (if I'm remembering right) is a fairly powerful demon in traditional lore. So I'm not sure how easy it would be to boss him around. Or if he's an incubus. Either way, I quite liked it.
Interesting chapter. I like the hell bits, even though the way they're interspersed with the rest of the story is a bit confusing. But the ferrymen were very interesting, as were the demonic species.
Just a thing to watch though, Asmodeus (if I'm remembering right) is a fairly powerful demon in traditional lore. So I'm not sure how easy it would be to boss him around. Or if he's an incubus. Either way, I quite liked it.
1/1/2011 c11 The Land is at the Bottom
Ha! I finally found this story again!
I was reading it a while ago, and then I lost it D:
I'm so glad I found it again~ And all I can say is: I enjoy the fact that le Candy King is like: You can TRY to kill me~ *smirk smirk*
And then instead of busting a BA move, he just vanishes. XD It was hilarious.
Ha! I finally found this story again!
I was reading it a while ago, and then I lost it D:
I'm so glad I found it again~ And all I can say is: I enjoy the fact that le Candy King is like: You can TRY to kill me~ *smirk smirk*
And then instead of busting a BA move, he just vanishes. XD It was hilarious.
12/31/2010 c11 4Aspiemor
It has been a while since I have seen this gem updated. For one thing I like how you have further established the underworld. I got a clear imagery at the creatures and the descriptions of it all. I did notice a mistake but I didn't think it detered the story at all. Well I for one hope you update this more.
4AspiemorIt has been a while since I have seen this gem updated. For one thing I like how you have further established the underworld. I got a clear imagery at the creatures and the descriptions of it all. I did notice a mistake but I didn't think it detered the story at all. Well I for one hope you update this more.