for Inside My Mind5/26/2012 c36 
9bballgirl22
aw i wish i had the courage to post my more personal poetry on here, luv ya girl
9bballgirl22aw i wish i had the courage to post my more personal poetry on here, luv ya girl
2/10/2011 c1 I-am-happy
Wow, deep. I think I can understand where this is coming from. Very well done. Like it made me smile, and frown, and just wanna cry. You should write some more, you have a nac for it.
Wow, deep. I think I can understand where this is coming from. Very well done. Like it made me smile, and frown, and just wanna cry. You should write some more, you have a nac for it.
8/3/2010 c17 PeaceKeeperRaven
C: hehe i have all ur poems and gotta say in this journey u took me wasent the straightest of ways. but from broken 2 to renewed is the best to end. I luvur poetry it has story and passion . I luk 4ward to reading more. I luv them all. keep da peace B.E. ur buddy R.
C: hehe i have all ur poems and gotta say in this journey u took me wasent the straightest of ways. but from broken 2 to renewed is the best to end. I luvur poetry it has story and passion . I luk 4ward to reading more. I luv them all. keep da peace B.E. ur buddy R.
8/2/2010 c3 PeaceKeeperRaven
u trusted some with something so dear 2 u. yet in the end he threw it away with second thinking. and it came to such shock that meer words he said hav an endless battle in ur head. :,( (sniff,sniff) u touch me heart. i luv this one 2. gud work B.E.
u trusted some with something so dear 2 u. yet in the end he threw it away with second thinking. and it came to such shock that meer words he said hav an endless battle in ur head. :,( (sniff,sniff) u touch me heart. i luv this one 2. gud work B.E.
8/2/2010 c2 PeaceKeeperRaven
Wow dedication and a second chance is wat I see also in a way u blaim urself. another amazing B.E. ^.^
Wow dedication and a second chance is wat I see also in a way u blaim urself. another amazing B.E. ^.^
8/2/2010 c1 PeaceKeeperRaven
very intersting i can c dat in ur poem. ur very much inviting me in ur head but u seem to be adding obsticles in my way sort of like not wating 2 know da real u. I luv it B.E. ^.^
very intersting i can c dat in ur poem. ur very much inviting me in ur head but u seem to be adding obsticles in my way sort of like not wating 2 know da real u. I luv it B.E. ^.^
8/2/2010 c1 Raven
very interesting i can see that in your poem you are letting me inside ur head but u seem 2 be adding obsticels in my. sort oflike not wanting 2 know da reall u. i luv it ^.^
very interesting i can see that in your poem you are letting me inside ur head but u seem 2 be adding obsticels in my. sort oflike not wanting 2 know da reall u. i luv it ^.^
6/13/2010 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Not as bad as you said it was, I like what you have here, especially your use of twirl. Honestly though, if you tell the reader that your work isn't the best, then how are we supposed to like it. If you don't have faith it your work, why should we.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietNot as bad as you said it was, I like what you have here, especially your use of twirl. Honestly though, if you tell the reader that your work isn't the best, then how are we supposed to like it. If you don't have faith it your work, why should we.
Juliet.