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for The Tears

7/3/2010 c1 2FixitfelixJRJRJR
I think most poets have written something like this. Doesn't mean it lessens its value though.

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6/24/2010 c1 17Anything.But.Perfection
The way you described it was really wonderful. It's a nice poem. And awesome rhyming, by the way :D
6/15/2010 c1 11a brain full of chaos
Nicely written, you created very strong images with so few words. Favourite lines "As my body hopelessly shakes, for all the tears i cried, for the sparkle in my eye that died." Great ending and it had a good flow to it. Definetly one of my favourites. Thank you and good job.

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