for The Tears7/3/2010 c1 
2FixitfelixJRJRJR
I think most poets have written something like this. Doesn't mean it lessens its value though.
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A.S.
2FixitfelixJRJRJRI think most poets have written something like this. Doesn't mean it lessens its value though.
Read and Review my own?
A.S.
6/24/2010 c1 17Anything.But.Perfection
The way you described it was really wonderful. It's a nice poem. And awesome rhyming, by the way :D
17Anything.But.PerfectionThe way you described it was really wonderful. It's a nice poem. And awesome rhyming, by the way :D
6/15/2010 c1 11a brain full of chaos
Nicely written, you created very strong images with so few words. Favourite lines "As my body hopelessly shakes, for all the tears i cried, for the sparkle in my eye that died." Great ending and it had a good flow to it. Definetly one of my favourites. Thank you and good job.
11a brain full of chaosNicely written, you created very strong images with so few words. Favourite lines "As my body hopelessly shakes, for all the tears i cried, for the sparkle in my eye that died." Great ending and it had a good flow to it. Definetly one of my favourites. Thank you and good job.