for Dialogue with a Stone Angel6/21/2010 c1 Isca
"A stone globe." Fascinating. The speaker appears to be a very mysterioius woman. I like that.
"Get out of the sun." Christ. The tone of this line is bone-chilling! Good work.
"A stone globe." Fascinating. The speaker appears to be a very mysterioius woman. I like that.
"Get out of the sun." Christ. The tone of this line is bone-chilling! Good work.
6/19/2010 c1 Punslinger
This is very well done and thoughtful. I especially like: "balance carefully on the ladders the sun makes." It's amazing how such a casual ordinary experience as looking at a statue can set off the creative process.
This is very well done and thoughtful. I especially like: "balance carefully on the ladders the sun makes." It's amazing how such a casual ordinary experience as looking at a statue can set off the creative process.