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1/9/2011 c1 76Rhocar
not a word of criticism here, you write beautifully, the glorious descriptions, if you know not from where it came, obviously you also have a muse, allow the muse to sit on your shoulder and let the words flow freely on the page, I too have felt the same after completing a piece, some are posted others not yet, bravo my friend
8/20/2010 c1 23July Tarrant
I love your style. Your words are incredible. You're so talented, definetely keep writing.
6/20/2010 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
Yeah. I see. It's one of those "Yes, here we go, bam bam bam" stories, where everything just flows? It was really good. I really enjoyed reading it, even if my head was only half way in it. So stressed 0.0

It was a very descriptive piece, and you relied on the imagery a lot, but for this it worked, because the emotion of it was conveyed within the descriptions. Lovely work :)
6/20/2010 c1 58IzumiKaede

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