for Eternal6/29/2010 c1 
99Dreamers-Requiem
Food for thought, with the end line. Overall, I really liked that poem; I like how it sort of started with a bit of an unclear meaning and unraveled a bit later on. I like the idea of that kind of 'presence' being there to comfort someone, and you can see the thought process going from 'I should be scared' to 'this feels normal', if that makes sense. Great last line, too.
99Dreamers-RequiemFood for thought, with the end line. Overall, I really liked that poem; I like how it sort of started with a bit of an unclear meaning and unraveled a bit later on. I like the idea of that kind of 'presence' being there to comfort someone, and you can see the thought process going from 'I should be scared' to 'this feels normal', if that makes sense. Great last line, too.