
7/13/2010 c6
2Chika Hanabi
this story sounds interesting. I wonder what happened to Kawai in her past...I can't wait for the next chapter!

this story sounds interesting. I wonder what happened to Kawai in her past...I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/12/2010 c6
7Setogirl2
sorry for catching up late this time 'trying to fix my writing' i'm really looking forward to the next chapter thestory is developing more

sorry for catching up late this time 'trying to fix my writing' i'm really looking forward to the next chapter thestory is developing more
6/30/2010 c4
1Rei Sagara
This story won't last very long?That's okay,I guess.Good job making this chapter longer than the others!*thumbs up*Please update soon.^_^

This story won't last very long?That's okay,I guess.Good job making this chapter longer than the others!*thumbs up*Please update soon.^_^
6/30/2010 c2 Rei Sagara
Interesting.I'll continue reading this story!Btw it's all right if your chapters aren't very long.My story chapters(fanfiction)are always short too.X)
Interesting.I'll continue reading this story!Btw it's all right if your chapters aren't very long.My story chapters(fanfiction)are always short too.X)
6/29/2010 c3
7Setogirl2
finally it`s updated
pretty good chapter but i still want more , i understand that you write short chapter but since the plot seems interesting i`m really looking forward to the next chapter
i hope you will update soon

finally it`s updated
pretty good chapter but i still want more , i understand that you write short chapter but since the plot seems interesting i`m really looking forward to the next chapter
i hope you will update soon
6/27/2010 c2 Setogirl2
okay i have to say your summary really got me so i want to read the rest
i hope i can write summaries like that
okay i have to say your summary really got me so i want to read the rest
i hope i can write summaries like that
6/25/2010 c2 open your eyes chopstick
yeah, sorry, I'm too lazy to log onto my account right now. The name I put up is the same for my account, btw. :) Anyways, there were a few grammer mistakes. You need to make sure there's number agreements, and on some parts, you could have added a colon. Other than that, you're right. short chapter. But it did leave it at a cliff hanger, which is always good.
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yeah, sorry, I'm too lazy to log onto my account right now. The name I put up is the same for my account, btw. :) Anyways, there were a few grammer mistakes. You need to make sure there's number agreements, and on some parts, you could have added a colon. Other than that, you're right. short chapter. But it did leave it at a cliff hanger, which is always good.
Do you mind R&R my stories/poems? Just search me name. Thanks :)