
6/27/2010 c1 Brittany C
OMG, I couldn't bother signing in to comment, but this is so amazing. That last line really drove to point the lines that preceded. It was overall very beautiful. There's something so different about your poems now than when we first met; they're a lot more mature and dive into deeper meanings. Oh, I just shivered when I read this poem, GREAT JOB!
OMG, I couldn't bother signing in to comment, but this is so amazing. That last line really drove to point the lines that preceded. It was overall very beautiful. There's something so different about your poems now than when we first met; they're a lot more mature and dive into deeper meanings. Oh, I just shivered when I read this poem, GREAT JOB!