7/23/2010 c3 SJ
kinda sad that u didnt finish ur other story. but this one is just as intersting. i really like it n its good u dont have them moving on too fast, but not to slow either.

take care. keep writing.

7/2/2010 c1 Rosey-Blue
ooh, nice!

great start!

i liked the part when they attack her, that was good.

6/27/2010 c3 romanceaddict
awesome chapter; things seems to be progressing nicely