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5/16/2011 c1 21songbirdalice
This was...interesting. Use woman colors when describing things; what I mean by that is chocolate, sky, emory. Not man words like black, brown, yellow. Your descriptions can be better, I know they can. Now that it is 2011 and your writing has improved, you should rewrite. :)
7/1/2010 c1 10neverstopwriting
:) that's really really good. I'd like to hear more if you have any.

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