for A Sleepy Lecture Night2/4/2011 c1 
612simpleplan13
The down/frown line seemed a bit off to me, but the rest worked well.
I love the idea behind the piece because I can totally relate. I have been in class and thought the same thing. The ending is great too, very funny and so true. Your descriptions were great throughout the piece as well.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).
612simpleplan13The down/frown line seemed a bit off to me, but the rest worked well.
I love the idea behind the piece because I can totally relate. I have been in class and thought the same thing. The ending is great too, very funny and so true. Your descriptions were great throughout the piece as well.
PS Check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).