for Galaxies7/24/2011 c9 
10AngelicExistence101
Awww, this was such a sweet chapter. I truly enjoyed every word. At first when I got the update, since you hadn't posted in awhile, I was like, "Oh, what was this again?" But as soon as I clicked on it I was like, "OH! It's this awesome story!" Ahahaha, and so I clicked on it, read it and enjoyed it.
Can't wait for the next update! :3
10AngelicExistence101Awww, this was such a sweet chapter. I truly enjoyed every word. At first when I got the update, since you hadn't posted in awhile, I was like, "Oh, what was this again?" But as soon as I clicked on it I was like, "OH! It's this awesome story!" Ahahaha, and so I clicked on it, read it and enjoyed it.
Can't wait for the next update! :3
10/30/2010 c8 2hopeless romantic2aT
I must say I was a little disappointed in not knowing what was said in that hospital room after 8 years of them not seeing one another. The bath tub scene was obviously adorable. I admire Ellie's complete density and inability to see how much she loves Cole. And now I am dying to see what happens next and what the hell they are talking about...I'm thinking it has to do with her 'accident' but for all I know it could be charades for God's sake. So hurry up and update!
2hopeless romantic2aTI must say I was a little disappointed in not knowing what was said in that hospital room after 8 years of them not seeing one another. The bath tub scene was obviously adorable. I admire Ellie's complete density and inability to see how much she loves Cole. And now I am dying to see what happens next and what the hell they are talking about...I'm thinking it has to do with her 'accident' but for all I know it could be charades for God's sake. So hurry up and update!
10/29/2010 c6 hopeless romantic2aT
Though I completely understand your need to keep Cole out of a chapter (I am having the same problem in one of my stories where all the main two characters do is think of each other, and thus each of their chapters becomes entirely consumed by the other) HOWEVER, I am missing him already. I cannot wait until he and Ellie reunite. Because I just know that's coming. Or at least, it better be...
Though I completely understand your need to keep Cole out of a chapter (I am having the same problem in one of my stories where all the main two characters do is think of each other, and thus each of their chapters becomes entirely consumed by the other) HOWEVER, I am missing him already. I cannot wait until he and Ellie reunite. Because I just know that's coming. Or at least, it better be...
10/29/2010 c5 hopeless romantic2aT
wow. I am intrigued. And what I said before about starting a story in a complicated way was meant as a compliment, in case you took it otherwise I wanted to clarify. It's just the summary did not make me think the story would start out like this and I was pleasantly surprised to find what lie within each chapter: the unexpected. Good job.
wow. I am intrigued. And what I said before about starting a story in a complicated way was meant as a compliment, in case you took it otherwise I wanted to clarify. It's just the summary did not make me think the story would start out like this and I was pleasantly surprised to find what lie within each chapter: the unexpected. Good job.
10/29/2010 c4 hopeless romantic2aT
I really like Cole so far. This is a complicated way to begin a story
I really like Cole so far. This is a complicated way to begin a story
10/29/2010 c8 10AngelicExistence101
Well, I personally loved that sweet, adorable love letter that Cole had written for Ellie, that's just so damn adorable! I mean it really is. It's so sweet, and I think I could picture Cole's priceless face ahahahah. xD
Y'know, Cole seems very insecure. I mean, maybe he hasn't had the best experiences with his previous significant other and needs to talk to someone but can't, or perhaps that's just his personality. Of course, I'm still thinking that something, at least something had to happen in order for Cole to feel the way he does. Hmm, perhaps I'm just over analyzing this? Yeah, that's quite possible actually aha.
Well, this was amazing and I certainly cannot wait for the next one (but of course I will definitely wait patiently just for you). =)
10AngelicExistence101Well, I personally loved that sweet, adorable love letter that Cole had written for Ellie, that's just so damn adorable! I mean it really is. It's so sweet, and I think I could picture Cole's priceless face ahahahah. xD
Y'know, Cole seems very insecure. I mean, maybe he hasn't had the best experiences with his previous significant other and needs to talk to someone but can't, or perhaps that's just his personality. Of course, I'm still thinking that something, at least something had to happen in order for Cole to feel the way he does. Hmm, perhaps I'm just over analyzing this? Yeah, that's quite possible actually aha.
Well, this was amazing and I certainly cannot wait for the next one (but of course I will definitely wait patiently just for you). =)
9/4/2010 c7 AngelicExistence101
Well, I have to side with Michelle... I think Mark did do it but just like any other woman who's been battered around by some egotistical bastard, they deny it because they're in love with them. =/ It's soo sad the way she covers his wrong doings... but the way she kept denying it does seem rather suspicious. Maybe it was that guy who tried to rape her last time?
Poor Cole! I felt bad for him at the beginning of the chapter, but I had a damn good feeling that he was going to try and see Ellie some how. (I loved the part about the little girl and the balloon, when she gave it to Cole.. too sweet) But yeah, I'm really hoping that Cole and Ellie will be able to establish something together, but it's going to take a long time... especially if Mark keeps butting into her future endevours.
I know one thing, I definitely can't wait for the next chapter of this awesome story! =)
Well, I have to side with Michelle... I think Mark did do it but just like any other woman who's been battered around by some egotistical bastard, they deny it because they're in love with them. =/ It's soo sad the way she covers his wrong doings... but the way she kept denying it does seem rather suspicious. Maybe it was that guy who tried to rape her last time?
Poor Cole! I felt bad for him at the beginning of the chapter, but I had a damn good feeling that he was going to try and see Ellie some how. (I loved the part about the little girl and the balloon, when she gave it to Cole.. too sweet) But yeah, I'm really hoping that Cole and Ellie will be able to establish something together, but it's going to take a long time... especially if Mark keeps butting into her future endevours.
I know one thing, I definitely can't wait for the next chapter of this awesome story! =)
8/7/2010 c6 3Lina89
Cute. I wish Allison could just be happy. She's so sweet. UPDATE!
P.S. The Beast's name is Adam. :)
3Lina89Cute. I wish Allison could just be happy. She's so sweet. UPDATE!
P.S. The Beast's name is Adam. :)
7/31/2010 c6 10AngelicExistence101
I am very, very glad that Allison has somewhere to stay and I'm EXTREMELY glad that she has left Mark. I know that it can't be that easy on her, considering that she does love Mark, but at the same time she knows that he isn't very good for her.
I have to say that I really love her desire to call Cole, that was very sweet. =) I think it's safe to say that Cole is probably wishing that she'd call him. I do wonder what's gone on with him and that Melissa or whatever her name was. Oh well. I do love how you put all your thoughts in at the end of the chapter aha that was too cute. =P
I LOVE Beauty and The Beast! ^^ Even though the Prince's name is NOT mentioned in the movie, it was believed to be 'Prince Adam' which is funny because that's my brother's name ahahaha.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! =D
10AngelicExistence101I am very, very glad that Allison has somewhere to stay and I'm EXTREMELY glad that she has left Mark. I know that it can't be that easy on her, considering that she does love Mark, but at the same time she knows that he isn't very good for her.
I have to say that I really love her desire to call Cole, that was very sweet. =) I think it's safe to say that Cole is probably wishing that she'd call him. I do wonder what's gone on with him and that Melissa or whatever her name was. Oh well. I do love how you put all your thoughts in at the end of the chapter aha that was too cute. =P
I LOVE Beauty and The Beast! ^^ Even though the Prince's name is NOT mentioned in the movie, it was believed to be 'Prince Adam' which is funny because that's my brother's name ahahaha.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! =D
7/30/2010 c4 3Lina89
Hey! :) Sorry, I read that you really needed to hear some possitive reviews about your story..we'll I can't tell you how much I like it so far! I think you've made a LOVELY character in Allison, even though she doesn't realize she's lovely and deserves so much better in her life. I'm hoping she discovers this and realizes she's a badass woman.
As for Cole...I'm slightly in love, to tell you the truth! And we haven't even met him much! :)
So update, update please, son! Can't wait. Poor Allison with Tony! I just hope Mark isn't stupid and thinks this is Allison's fault or something...he's just that type of person...
3Lina89Hey! :) Sorry, I read that you really needed to hear some possitive reviews about your story..we'll I can't tell you how much I like it so far! I think you've made a LOVELY character in Allison, even though she doesn't realize she's lovely and deserves so much better in her life. I'm hoping she discovers this and realizes she's a badass woman.
As for Cole...I'm slightly in love, to tell you the truth! And we haven't even met him much! :)
So update, update please, son! Can't wait. Poor Allison with Tony! I just hope Mark isn't stupid and thinks this is Allison's fault or something...he's just that type of person...
7/27/2010 c5 10AngelicExistence101
I don't see why you wouldn't like it, it's AMAZING! I really, really genuinely mean that. I love every single chatper you write though ahah. But still. I do have a couple things I'd like to say of course, but that's nothing new aha.
I, just like Allison began to wonder what it was Mark was hiding from her. I've brought it down to one of two conclusions. Either a) Mark is the one messing around on Ellie with another woman... or b) he was planning out this get together. but then even if he was, why hide it the bedroom over it? I mean, what the hell? Y'know?
And then we have Allison wanting to call Cole so badly but she didn't want to in case Mark checked her phone. Hm. In a way I can understand, but why can't she just delete the phone call history in her phone, hm? As far as the texting, I'd keep that pretty limited and deleted too. I mean, he might see it in the phone bill, but it would save her for a little while. Y'know what I mean?
And of course Mark has to have his sleezy friends over, only for Allison to get violated like that by Tony. Well, I actually hope that Mark will believe what he sees and not blame it all on Allison and how she must have "led him on" at one point. I mean, I can actually see Mark being able to flip it around like that, but I really hope he doesn't.
Well, as you can tell I have absolutely loved the chapter very, very much and I can't wait for the next one! =D
10AngelicExistence101I don't see why you wouldn't like it, it's AMAZING! I really, really genuinely mean that. I love every single chatper you write though ahah. But still. I do have a couple things I'd like to say of course, but that's nothing new aha.
I, just like Allison began to wonder what it was Mark was hiding from her. I've brought it down to one of two conclusions. Either a) Mark is the one messing around on Ellie with another woman... or b) he was planning out this get together. but then even if he was, why hide it the bedroom over it? I mean, what the hell? Y'know?
And then we have Allison wanting to call Cole so badly but she didn't want to in case Mark checked her phone. Hm. In a way I can understand, but why can't she just delete the phone call history in her phone, hm? As far as the texting, I'd keep that pretty limited and deleted too. I mean, he might see it in the phone bill, but it would save her for a little while. Y'know what I mean?
And of course Mark has to have his sleezy friends over, only for Allison to get violated like that by Tony. Well, I actually hope that Mark will believe what he sees and not blame it all on Allison and how she must have "led him on" at one point. I mean, I can actually see Mark being able to flip it around like that, but I really hope he doesn't.
Well, as you can tell I have absolutely loved the chapter very, very much and I can't wait for the next one! =D
7/26/2010 c5 3Lina89
This is pretty amazing. Please keep going, I think Cole is so sweet and I can't wait to see if they are ever going to see each other again face to face.
Update soon!
3Lina89This is pretty amazing. Please keep going, I think Cole is so sweet and I can't wait to see if they are ever going to see each other again face to face.
Update soon!
7/21/2010 c4 10AngelicExistence101
I will definitely tell you how I thought about the chapter: I thought it was amazing!
It seems as though Ellie came from a broken home, and it makes me wonder more about Cole and his own background, especially with his parents. Also it seemed that after that, they seemed to be closer as friends and I'm sure that's probably when she'd start talking to him more.
I have to say that I liked the light quarreling between Cole and Ellie when he had to figure how he'd say "Sorry," when he indeed didn't do anything wrong. A guy is gonna have friends okay no matter who you are. And if his best friend happens to be a girl, it's still no different. They're 'best friends' for a reason and if they wanted to get together I'm sure they would have done it years ago. That's not the point but anyways, it's obvious that Melissa is jealous of him calling Ellie, but I think that girl needs to back off quite a bit. It's not like he's having sexual intercourse with her, he's just talking to Ellie, his best friend, over the telephone. It's probably way easier for him to talk to Ellie than it is Melissa for sure.
Well, you can see that I really liked this chapter and I totally can't wait for the next one!
10AngelicExistence101I will definitely tell you how I thought about the chapter: I thought it was amazing!
It seems as though Ellie came from a broken home, and it makes me wonder more about Cole and his own background, especially with his parents. Also it seemed that after that, they seemed to be closer as friends and I'm sure that's probably when she'd start talking to him more.
I have to say that I liked the light quarreling between Cole and Ellie when he had to figure how he'd say "Sorry," when he indeed didn't do anything wrong. A guy is gonna have friends okay no matter who you are. And if his best friend happens to be a girl, it's still no different. They're 'best friends' for a reason and if they wanted to get together I'm sure they would have done it years ago. That's not the point but anyways, it's obvious that Melissa is jealous of him calling Ellie, but I think that girl needs to back off quite a bit. It's not like he's having sexual intercourse with her, he's just talking to Ellie, his best friend, over the telephone. It's probably way easier for him to talk to Ellie than it is Melissa for sure.
Well, you can see that I really liked this chapter and I totally can't wait for the next one!
7/11/2010 c3 AngelicExistence101
Hm. Well Cole seemed to be falling directly head over heels for Ellie, which is absolutely adorable! I mean, even when his friend gave him doubt, Cole didn't let it stop him. He's a lot more determined than I would be ahahahaha. I would just let them go and not bother to take the risk at all. But that's me and probably why I'm not with anyone ahahah. Anyway! On to more important matters...
So we know that presently Cole is with some chick Melissa... but how did she come into the picture? I'm thinking that Cole never really got over his crush of Ellie, he just stopped trying. Also how did Mark come into Ellie's life? It's a great jigsaw puzzle that I cannot wait to figure out!
This is such an awesome story and I can't wait for more. =D
Hm. Well Cole seemed to be falling directly head over heels for Ellie, which is absolutely adorable! I mean, even when his friend gave him doubt, Cole didn't let it stop him. He's a lot more determined than I would be ahahahaha. I would just let them go and not bother to take the risk at all. But that's me and probably why I'm not with anyone ahahah. Anyway! On to more important matters...
So we know that presently Cole is with some chick Melissa... but how did she come into the picture? I'm thinking that Cole never really got over his crush of Ellie, he just stopped trying. Also how did Mark come into Ellie's life? It's a great jigsaw puzzle that I cannot wait to figure out!
This is such an awesome story and I can't wait for more. =D
7/8/2010 c2 AngelicExistence101
You may totally roll your eyes now, but it's almozt screaming obvious that Cole and Allison should be together, not them with other people. But that's exactly how this all goes.
Cole is so cute! =P It's weird, but it's like by the dialogue in the story, reading what's stressing him out and how he might be handling that stress and such, it's like I can clearly see him and grasp a sense of who he is as a person. I'm glad that he feels he can talk to Alison and vice versa. I honestly think that this Melissa is being a bit too dramatic, but that's just my opinion.
Anyways, I can't wait to read more of this awesome story though!
You may totally roll your eyes now, but it's almozt screaming obvious that Cole and Allison should be together, not them with other people. But that's exactly how this all goes.
Cole is so cute! =P It's weird, but it's like by the dialogue in the story, reading what's stressing him out and how he might be handling that stress and such, it's like I can clearly see him and grasp a sense of who he is as a person. I'm glad that he feels he can talk to Alison and vice versa. I honestly think that this Melissa is being a bit too dramatic, but that's just my opinion.
Anyways, I can't wait to read more of this awesome story though!