
8/11/2010 c1
81BedHead-RedHead
that was absolutely magical! love everything about it, especially the lines at the end about magic, hope and beauty. The different fonts and styles of the words were genius- each makes the word hit the reader with a different emotional appeal. And I love that you ended it with a question- uncommon, but it worked beautifully! :)

that was absolutely magical! love everything about it, especially the lines at the end about magic, hope and beauty. The different fonts and styles of the words were genius- each makes the word hit the reader with a different emotional appeal. And I love that you ended it with a question- uncommon, but it worked beautifully! :)
7/1/2010 c1 sdkjfpaoierjgpoirgjporughqioe
Loved it. Loved the form and the bracketed interjections that guide the motion of the poem. Really well done.
Loved it. Loved the form and the bracketed interjections that guide the motion of the poem. Really well done.