for In My Mind12/9/2010 c1 
6mindreader311
um let me think UPDATE! Let me give you a tip on fictionpress, the more chapters and complete stories you have= more reviews and readers which make for happy writers! UPDATE SON
6mindreader311um let me think UPDATE! Let me give you a tip on fictionpress, the more chapters and complete stories you have= more reviews and readers which make for happy writers! UPDATE SON
9/1/2010 c1 4Rav1209
please write more. i really like it and if my opinion matters i think you should write more. i guess i already said that oh well. also i know its a selfish request but could you please read one of my stories. keep it up writing that is.
4Rav1209please write more. i really like it and if my opinion matters i think you should write more. i guess i already said that oh well. also i know its a selfish request but could you please read one of my stories. keep it up writing that is.
8/31/2010 c1 3sweet-karma2010
so far so good and following chapters will definently get better :)
please upload quickly, looking forward to see whats going to happen :)
3sweet-karma2010so far so good and following chapters will definently get better :)
please upload quickly, looking forward to see whats going to happen :)
7/8/2010 c1 1Passionately Yours
As of now, it's pretty decent, but I'm sure it'll improve the more chapters you write. Good luck!
1Passionately YoursAs of now, it's pretty decent, but I'm sure it'll improve the more chapters you write. Good luck!