
5/11/2011 c7
13NoOrdinaryUnicorn3
Again, great chapter! Continue! I can't wait to see what other changes you've made! :)

Again, great chapter! Continue! I can't wait to see what other changes you've made! :)
5/11/2011 c4 3NoOrdinaryUnicorn3
Awesome chapter! And something I forgot to say in my last review, I actually think magic credit cards are more confusing than magical pockets, but you know, you're the writer. Whatever works for you. xD
Awesome chapter! And something I forgot to say in my last review, I actually think magic credit cards are more confusing than magical pockets, but you know, you're the writer. Whatever works for you. xD
5/11/2011 c3 3NoOrdinaryUnicorn3
I usually don't review for every chapter, but I felt like I needed to. xD
Is it weird that I squealed when I saw my username at the bottom? Haha, but thanks for sticking me there, I love reviewing, and it never feels like a chore :)
I usually don't review for every chapter, but I felt like I needed to. xD
Is it weird that I squealed when I saw my username at the bottom? Haha, but thanks for sticking me there, I love reviewing, and it never feels like a chore :)
5/10/2011 c7 queenjade
Hey!
I LOVE this story!
I'm always so excited when you've posted up a new chapter :D
Peyton is actually brilliant, I love her feisty personality..she's not like most of the leading ladies out there..she's a lot cooler, and not whiny! :D
Nate..I kind of love him already :) I need more Nate and Peyton chapters :D
Are your names one tree hill inspired by any chance? Peyton, Brooke, Nate? Or is it just coincedence? either way, I like one tree hill so I don't mind!
Eurus is an ass but I'm glad Peyton kicked him to the curb, she deserves someone better..like...NATE :D
This story is so original, it's such a great story!
Can't wait for chapter 8!
Jade
xoxo
TEAM NATE+PEYTON!
Hey!
I LOVE this story!
I'm always so excited when you've posted up a new chapter :D
Peyton is actually brilliant, I love her feisty personality..she's not like most of the leading ladies out there..she's a lot cooler, and not whiny! :D
Nate..I kind of love him already :) I need more Nate and Peyton chapters :D
Are your names one tree hill inspired by any chance? Peyton, Brooke, Nate? Or is it just coincedence? either way, I like one tree hill so I don't mind!
Eurus is an ass but I'm glad Peyton kicked him to the curb, she deserves someone better..like...NATE :D
This story is so original, it's such a great story!
Can't wait for chapter 8!
Jade
xoxo
TEAM NATE+PEYTON!
5/9/2011 c7 Alixermixer
This story is too cute. I have a feeling that with all the trouble that Peyton is having, that Nate made up this story about Ariel but I wonder what for. I hope you come back soon to finish.
This story is too cute. I have a feeling that with all the trouble that Peyton is having, that Nate made up this story about Ariel but I wonder what for. I hope you come back soon to finish.
5/9/2011 c7
3maluka
this story looks like its gonna be really good and interesting. havent read anything like it before. im excited to see where this will go!

this story looks like its gonna be really good and interesting. havent read anything like it before. im excited to see where this will go!
5/8/2011 c7
6Queen.Of.Cupcakes
Haha Peyton got Eurus good! I really like how all the sentences flow together in this chapter(;

Haha Peyton got Eurus good! I really like how all the sentences flow together in this chapter(;
5/8/2011 c7
1surrendertomusic
Well Eurus, Petyton is obviously meant to be with Nate =D
loved it :)
can't wait for more!

Well Eurus, Petyton is obviously meant to be with Nate =D
loved it :)
can't wait for more!
5/8/2011 c6
4LiveLaughLoveLuck
OMG I beg u!
Please please please update soon. I can't wait to read more of this. Nate & Peyton will be such a cute couple! Love this story! :D

OMG I beg u!
Please please please update soon. I can't wait to read more of this. Nate & Peyton will be such a cute couple! Love this story! :D
5/7/2011 c6
1surrendertomusic
Aw! Poor nate =/ haha, oh well. I wonder who brooke will end up with though?
Loved it :)
Update soon!

Aw! Poor nate =/ haha, oh well. I wonder who brooke will end up with though?
Loved it :)
Update soon!