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8/1/2011 c1 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Excellent job! The some wasn't really my style, but I loved your story. I really liked the characters already having backgrounds and not worrying about monologing about it.
10/12/2010 c1 18Stephanie M. Moore
That was really nice!

You really create a nice moment between this couple in few words; you incorporate the song really nicely, too. At first, I didn't realize that I had heard the song, until I remembered that I did...

You also have a great writing style and grammar. Keep up the good work.

- Stephanie
7/9/2010 c1 1Citrine Paradox
You freaked ME out. :O

Aww, Atalya... I MISS YOU. Come back to this place. DEVIANTART IS HAVING A PARTY.

IN AUGUST.

SEVENTH.

THERE WILL BE REAL LLAMAS, I SWEAR IT!
7/8/2010 c1 3browniehaze
I like it!

I didn't know you wrote romance :) Good job!

(Side note: I updated)

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